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The October Vortex

Stitch Series — The Lore of Sara Foxgrave

By Syl De'VilPublished 3 days ago Updated 3 days ago 5 min read
The October Vortex
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Dreams are doorways, and tonight one opens in the middle of Beaver Pond.

October shouldn’t have sounded like this.

Beaver Pond buzzed with cicadas — that thick, electric hum that only happened on the hottest days of summer. Crickets layered beneath them, frantic and constant, like the forest was vibrating. The air hung heavy, wet, pressing against Sara’s skin like a fever.

It smelled wrong too. Not crisp leaves or cold dirt. But warm algae, sun-baked pine, and the metallic tang of heat that had no business being here.

Sara stepped out of her clothes and into the water. The pond wrapped around her ankles, cold enough to bite. She waded deeper, letting the chill climb her thighs, her hips, her ribs. When she finally sank beneath the surface, the cold swallowed the heat in one clean rush, seeping into her bones and calming the creature pacing behind her chest.

Underwater, the world muted. The cicadas became a distant vibration. The pond smelled of mud and old leaves, the kind of smell that clung to her hair for hours. She floated naked, eyes closed, letting the water cradle her as she were weightless… as if she were nothing.

She felt it — something in the atmosphere changed in an instant. The hair on the back of her neck stuck straight out and her skin pricked as if it were anticipating something her consciousness hadn’t recognized yet.

A pressure shift, sudden, sharp, like the air had been sucked out of the forest. The water tightened around her, pulling at her skin. A ripple brushed her shoulder. She looked behind her and a massive wave too big for Beaver Pond crashed over her, slamming her under the water with a brutal unrelenting force.

Disoriented she scrambled to compass herself and frantically swam to the surface of the lake.

Sara finally surfaced.

The cicadas had stopped.

All at once.

The silence was worse than the noise, louder almost. A ringing in her ear consuming all her senses.

She blinked pond water from her lashes. The sky had changed. Clouds were racing across it, low and fast, like they were being dragged by invisible hands. The treetops shuddered. The temperature dropped so fast her breath fogged.

A derecho.

A violent, sideways storm that didn’t belong anywhere near Maine in October.

The wind hit Beaver Pond like a wild freight train. It flattened the surface, spraying cold water into the air, spraying her face. The smell of wet earth and torn leaves slammed into her, stinging her skin like millions of wasps. The trees bent, groaning, creaking, shedding branches that cracked like they were brittle bones.

And then she saw him.

Bane stood on the opposite bank, half-shadowed by the towering pines. He didn’t move. He didn’t flinch. He didn’t look confused by the storm ripping the world apart.

He looked like he had been waiting — like he had always been waiting.

Sara’s breath caught. Her skin prickled. She blinked hard, trying to clear her vision, but he stayed there, solid, unmoving, unreal.

“Not again,” she whispered, voice swallowed by the wind.

She took a step toward him, water dragging at her thighs. “You’re not real,” she screamed at the top of her lungs.

Bane didn’t answer. He never answered.

He was a dream she couldn’t stop having, a face that surfaced whenever the world went strange. She had never met him. Never touched him. Never heard his voice outside of sleep.

But he was here — impossibly here.

The wind screamed. The pond churned. The sky cracked open with a flash of purple lightning, thick and unnatural, striking the center of the water. The smell of ozone hit her like a slap. The pond erupted upward, glowing violet beneath the surface.

Sara staggered as the shockwave punched through her chest.

Another bolt followed, green, neon and sickly, splitting the sky in a crooked line. It hit so close she felt the electricity crawl across her skin like insects.

The derecho intensified, a horizontal wall of wind ripping through the forest, shredding leaves into confetti. The cicadas started again, but wrong, too loud, too fast, like they were screaming. The sound was terrifying.

Sara lost her footing.

The water pulled her under again.

Everything went silent again, all but the thrum of her own blood coursing through her veins.

Purple and green light bled through the pond, swirling around her like ink. Her limbs felt heavy. Her heartbeat slowed. The cold deepened until she couldn’t tell where her body ended and the water began.

Something brushed her wrist. Not weeds. Not fish. Something deliberate.

She kicked, panic flaring in her chest, but the grip tightened. The colors pulsed brighter, wrapping her in ribbons of light.

She opened her mouth to scream, but water filled her throat.

A hand closed around her wrist.

Sara’s eyes snapped open.

Bane was there, underwater with her, his hair drifting like thick tendrils of oil in every direction, his eyes dark and steady. He didn’t look like a dream now. He looked carved from the same impossible light that was swallowing her.

He pulled her upward with a strength that felt unreal.

They broke the surface just as the pond changed.

Not the wind.

Not the lightning.

The water — it began to spin.

A slow rotation at first, a lazy circle, then faster, and faster, until the entire pond twisted into a spiraling vortex. The sound was deafening, a roar layered with cicadas, wind, cracking branches, and something deeper, older, like a groan from beneath the earth.

The vortex grabbed her.

It lifted her.

Water wrapped around her legs, her waist, her ribs, pulling her upward like hands made of current. The world blurred, purple, green, black, white, spinning so fast she couldn’t tell sky from water.

Bane reached for her again — his fingers brushing her arm.

“You’re not real,” she gasped.

His voice finally came, quiet and wrong and echoing like it wasn’t meant for this world.

“Wake up.”

The vortex snapped tight.

Sara was yanked upward, swallowed by light, ripped out of the pond, out of the forest, out of the heat, out of the dream.

She woke with a scream.

Author’s Note

Sara Foxgrave has always existed between planes — the waking world, the dreaming world, and the thin places where reality folds in on itself. Sometimes she slips through on purpose. Sometimes she’s dragged. This story touches one of those crossings, where the wrong season, the wrong storm, and the wrong presence all bleed together. In the Stitch universe, dreams aren’t just dreams. They’re doorways… and sometimes they open on their own.

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About the Creator

Syl De'Vil

Air Force veteran, ex‑cop, retired bruiser, mother of eleven and one tiny heir. Bone collector, garden witch, anime gremlin. skip tracer, I throw knives, rescue roadside relics, and write worlds stitched from insomnia.

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