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The Mystery Box Foundation

The 27 Club

By Rick Henry Christopher Published about a year ago Updated 6 months ago 9 min read

It is 3:33 p.m. and 33 seconds and like clockwork Ryde's mail has been received. As Ryde scans his mind, he sees the usual white lights flashing which indicates junk mail. Ryde deletes the flashing white lights and is left with two yellow lights which indicate bills, so he files those into his bill folder. Each bill will pop up 10 minutes before they are due and will automatically be paid. But there's one light left, a mysterious purple light which he's never seen before.

Ryde took a moment to scan his entire temporal lobe to see if there was any other mail available before coming back to the purple light. Sometimes mail gets misplaced transferring from the occipital lobes to the temporal lobe where it can be viewed.

After the 20 second scan is complete Ryde discovered there was no other mail. So he focused back on the mysterious purple light.

The purple light becomes front and center on Ryde's mind screen. Set to mimic his voice, Ryde's vocalizer states that it is from a company named The Mystery Box Foundation. Then a cheerful and energetic female vocalizer says, "You are the winner of a free mystery box," a musical ringtone sounds after the announcement. This has Ryde intrigued as this is the first time he's ever won anything.

Ryde visually commanded the purple light to expand and reveal its details. The first pop-up image was a bright yellow coupon with sparkling edges. The text on the coupon reads: "You are the winner of a mystery box. CHOOSE ONE OF FIVE BOXES." The coupon fades away and a gray box of text appears: "Choose from the following Mystery Boxes: Oldies Music of the 2080s, HKP Favorites, Fashion Tips Weekly (Androgynous Edition), Modern Culinary Experiences, or The Mystery Wheel Mystery Box. * The Mystery Wheel Mystery Box offers a free spin of the Mystery Wheel which has more than 33,000 Mystery Boxes on it. Your random Mystery Wheel selection will remain a mystery until you receive your mystery box. This offer will expire in 15 minutes."

Right at that moment an internal time clock was set for 15 minutes.

→ As a side note to those reading this story: HKP = Heliokinesis Port which is the mind computer's equivalent of television.

Ryde was interested in the HKP Favorites and Modern Culinary Experiences. He gave this some thought weighing the pros and cons of each. Then a bell chimed, and the female vocalizer said, "Warning you have only 15 seconds left to choose your Mystery Box."

Quickly Ryde focused in on HKP Favorites but before locking in he scanned over to Culinary Experiences. In the process of moving his focus in the very last millisecond he accidentally locked into the Mystery Wheel.

Instantly the Mystery Wheel popped up with sounds of fireworks and annoyingly happy circus music. The bright yellow words 'SPIN ME' came bouncing up and down in front of the Mystery Wheel with a flashing red button.

Ryde was disappointed but was also intrigued, so he focused on the flashing red button and locked into it. The wheel began to spining furiously and spun away into the background almost invisible and it came back and stopped on a green panel. Bells and sirens sounded off and the words, "CONGRATULATIONS! Your Mystery Box has been chosen," flashed across Ryde's mindviewer.

Within three seconds Ryde received a vocalizer message from The Mystery Box Foundation. The message explained that his mystery box was a physical prize and that it would be delivered via drone within the next 27 minutes and apologized for the extended length of delivery.

As he waited for his prize Ryde decided to have a snack. He had some leftover lasagna in the pantry. In the year 2124 refrigerators were now a thing of the past. Items that needed cool, cold, or freezing storage went into a designated section of the pantry in which the atmosphere is modulated by vapor controls to emulate cold or freezing temperatures to preserve fresh food and beverages. Kitchens are completely mechainzed and leave no room for human beings. All tasks are completed by automation and initiated by the mind computations of the person or people registered to use the appliances and other automated items in the house. Even making a home cooked meal is completed through a computed formulation and is carried out by programmed drones and robots. The most used appliance is the solarwave oven. Ryde had his nicely warmed lasagna in front of him within 51 seconds.

27 minutes came to pass, and Ryde's mystery box had still not arrived. It was now 27 minutes and 15 seconds and still nothing. He was beginning to wonder if the box was going to arrive. Finally, at 27 minutes and 28.3048 seconds he heard the faint whirring of the drone. As the drone entered his property it showed up on his mentalview system. When it was dropped off the drone activated the alert system at the entry door signaling that someone or something was present. The alert system scanned the situation and sent an image of the small 4" x 4" x 4" box to Ryde's ocular port. Ryde approved the drone to bring in the mystery box.

During this time The Mystery Box Foundation (MBF) contacted Ryde to apologize for the late arrival. The box was tracked at an arrival time of 27 minutes and 33.000337 seconds. MBF offered Ryde a free month of HKP services.

Sitting in his solar room Ryde held the box in his hands thinking, "This is a much smaller box than I expected."

He opened the box and found a small shaker cup with a lid and four test tubes with different colored liquids in them. One was green, one blue, one yellow, and one red. Beneath the test tubes was a small eight-page instruction booklet entitled "The 27 Club."

Ryde opened the booklet and began reading, "Compliments of The Mystery Box Foundation, you have been granted the distinct privilege of being among the inaugural individuals worldwide to partake in The 27 Club game. This immersive experience offers you a unique opportunity to delve into the profound emotional landscape of a member of The 27 Club. The "27 Club" is a term used to refer to a group of influential people who all died at the age of 27. For this abbreviated version you can choose from one of the 12 names listed: Robert Johnson 1911 to 1938, Jimi Hendrix 1942 to 1970, Janis Joplin 1943 to 1970, Jim Morrison 1943 to 1971, Roger Lee Durham 1946 to 1973, Jean Michel-Basqiat 1960 to 1988, Kurt Cobain 1967 to 1994, Amy Winehouse 1983 to 2011, Benjamin Keough 1992 to 2020, Cinthia Register 2017 to 2045, Janteel Simpson 2038 to 2065, or Mikel 2088 to 2116."

Ryde, who happens to be 27 years old, almost chose Mikel as he's a big fan of his music. But instead went with Benjamin Keough as Ryde has long had a fascination with Elvis Presley and thought maybe getting into the brain of his grandson would be interesting.

The next page explained how to mix the tubes in order to access Benjamin Keough's thoughts and emotions.

1. Pour half of the blue tube into a bowl (There is a line in the tube which indicates the halfway mark).

2. Pour the entire green tube in and mix the contents in the bowl.

3. In a second bowl pour in the second half of the blue tube.

4. Pour the entire contents of the yellow tube into bowl two and mix.

5. Combine bowl one with bowl two and mix thoroughly.

6. Pour the entire contents of the red tube into the combined bowl and pour into the included shaker cup with lid and shake for two minutes.

Prior to the final stage, the manual provides a precautionary notice indicating that upon consumption of the blended liquid, the effects will manifest instantly and endure for a duration of 27 minutes. Possible side effects during this experiment may encompass sensations of anxiety and unease.

7. Drink the entire contents in the shaker cup and enjoy the ride.

Before starting this process Ryde contemplated whether he should participate in this game.

After a few minutes of consideration Ryde decided to go ahead and he drank the mixture.

Within seconds he began to feel a sense of extreme excitement. He was on top of the world. He felt like he was untouchable and invincible. He was 11 years old and was in front of a full-length mirror wearing a Harley Davidson cap his grandfather used to wear. Then he tried swiveling his hips just like his grandad did back in the 1950s. Ryde or Benjamin wore his pride on his chest. He was Elvis Presley's grandson. Nobody could ever take that away from him.

With every passing minute, Ryde's sense of self started to fade, eventually becoming entirely consumed by the persona of Benjamin Keough.

The enthusiasm and intoxicating joyfulness continued to grow. The 16-year-old Keough secured a five-album record deal with Universal Music Group. His adrenaline was pumping. Ryde could feel his heart rate increasing with excitement. He was going to be a worldwide superstar just like good old grandaddy.

But two years went by, and three years went by and there was no album released. But still everywhere he went people told the 20-year-old Benjamin just how much he was the spitting image of his grandfather Elvis Presley.

The expectations of Benjamin Keough following in his grandfather's footsteps continued to grow and grow. But the reality was that it was not happening. Maybe Benjamin wasn't good enough. Maybe he didn't have the singing voice to make it happen.

At the age of 21, Benjamin found comfort in alcohol and drugs as a means to cope with his sorrow. He struggled deeply with depression.

By the time he was 24 years old a dark cloud hung over him everywhere he went. He came to resent being Elvis Presley's only grandson. He no longer wanted that identity. He grew ashamed. He was not able to live up to the name of Elvis Presley.

When he reached the age of 27, his depression had become profoundly entrenched. He found himself trapped in the illusion that he was inadequate, with no way out. The feeling overtook every single aspect of his life. It was a dark and dreadful feeling. Ryde began feeling this depression so deep as if it was his own depression. Trapped in this illusion of Benjamin Keough's life, Ryde was not able to separate himself from this very deep pain. Ryde began to cry incessantly. He felt knots in his stomach and his hands began to shake. But as the minutes wore on and it came close to the 27 minute time limit, Ryde began seeing Benjamin Keough as a separate person. No longer did he completely identify as Keough.

Then a warning entered Ryde's mind receptor and a vocalizer chimed in stating, "Only one minute left." Ryde knew his experience with The 27 Club was coming to an end.

Though Ryde no longer identified as Benjamin Keough he simply could not shake the dreadful dark feeling of hopelessness. Ryde felt like he was at death's door. Suddenly a loud chiming sound entered Ryde's mind and the words, "Your adventure is complete. We hope you enjoyed the trip."

Ryde was back sitting in his subsistence range comfortable and depression free. He felt good again, but the memory of Benjamin Keough would forever stay with him.

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Rick Henry Christopher

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock6 months ago

    Extremely interesting take on the challenge!

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  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    This is interesting, thought-provoking & well done. Thanks for sharing it with us! :)

  • JBazabout a year ago

    What a great concept. The 27 club is an excellent story and I love how you incorporated it into a challenge. If not for this I would not have really known about Benjamin Keough. Very well done

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    What a fabulous job! So unique and clever. I don't know how you come up with all your ideas, but please don't stop

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Great story! I loved the tone you set up and the use of the HKP. If felt like I was in his head using it too as I read. Great imagination and details! Interesting enough, I also utilized music in my mystery box challenge. I will post it soon. Good luck with this one, It's definitely a contender.

  • Miranda Putneyabout a year ago

    I love this! It is somehow both dystopian and retrospective, very clever! I wrote an ode for Janis, too! Also, I hope my kitchen never decides it doesn't need me anymore :)!

  • Aphoticabout a year ago

    This was very interesting and original. I want to know more about the futuristic world you’ve built! I was hoping Ryde would pick Morrison or Kurt, but after reading more I’m glad you went with Keough. Living in someone’s shadow is a huge mental battle and often causes emotional turmoil when one isn’t able to live up to the expectations. Heartbreaking, really. Such a fun concept/creative take on the challenge. Great work!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, I really loved this premise!! What a cool idea that you fully fleshed out. This was very well done, and I greatly enjoyed it :)

  • This was such a mindblowing concept! One of the best entries that I've read for this challenge! Everything was so well done! And lol, I just realised that Ryde went on a ride 🤣 Was that pun intentional? I loved your story so much!

  • Gal Muxabout a year ago

    Wow this was a great great read!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Really unique creative take on the challenge. Enjoyed the ride, but just hope our future doesn't end way. Hearted ❤️ Great story

  • Irene Economouabout a year ago

    Hi Rick, this futuristic story was incredibly detailed and had me completely locked in. I wasn’t sure if Ryde was a robot at first…so mechanized were his actions. But even if he was a robot, he was still able to feel the emotions of Elvis’s grandson, complete with tears and depression. So perhaps all will not be lost in a futuristic evolution of mankind. Well done, Rick. Your stories always make me think! 😊❤️

  • Emily Marie Concannonabout a year ago

    Omg I just finished and it was ASTOUNDING! really loved how you set the numerical significance throughout the story. I believe I would've chosen Johnson from 1911 ☺️☺️ really amazing and well done 👍 🤗 Side note, j thought I was subscribed! Apparently I wasn't but I just subscribed!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    So creative and really enjoyed this spin on the prompt! Well done:)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is really well done, and quite unique. I was worried how it would end and glad it worked out. Not sure I'd want a future like that, though.

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Wow! Intrigue, futurism, adventure galore. What a ride! I was hoping he’d pick Hendrix. Excellent story. 🥰 Wouldn’t it be cool if you had enough word space the reader could pick their 27 experience. Love the entire concept. Beyond well done.

  • Excellent work for the challenge Rick

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