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The Most Valuable Treasure

The Search Was Over

By Tina KowalskiPublished 5 months ago 2 min read
The Most Valuable Treasure
Photo by Filip Rankovic Grobgaard on Unsplash

The blisters on his feet were almost as bad as the sunburn spreading across the exposed parts of his neck and arms. Ignoring these inconveniences, Ralph carried on, desperately looking for the child who had wandered off. The panic in his eyes caused people to stare at him, moving out of his way as his determined frame moved briskly toward them. He barely noticed his fellow humans as his mind focused on one singular goal—to find his little boy, Nathan.

They had only been on at the park for a short time before his sister-in-law, Rowena, had come over to discuss the details of a surprise birthday party they were planning for his wife, Julianne.

Checking in every few minutes, Ralph had thought it was safe to speak with her. Unfortunately, the conversation required more concentration than expected, and he momentarily forgot about Nathan. When he looked back to where Nathan had been playing, a chill ran up his spine.

At first, he told himself not to panic—Nathan was probably just behind part of the play structure. A quick search of the area disabused him of that notion, his eyes unable to locate the bright red jacket Nathan had been wearing. That’s when the panic set in.

He ran from parent to parent, shoving his phone into surprised faces, desperately hoping one of them had seen Nathan. Faced with only confused “sorrys,” he dialed 911. His high-pitched voice prevented the operator from understanding anything other than the words “son”, “not here”, and “park.”

The police were there in minutes. A brief search revealed no signs of Nathan having been taken. Within an hour, a group of volunteers had assembled, and the search party moved in all directions. Rowena stayed behind in case Nathan returned.

Moving at a speed he did not think possible, Ralph headed in the direction of their home, hoping that Nathan had wanted to see his mom and had headed there. Calling out every few minutes, he listened intently before moving on.

Then he heard it, the faint, tearful cry of “Daddy!” drifting toward him. Looking around, he called again and headed down an alley toward the sound.

Looking inside boxes and behind garbage, he finally located Nathan, smudged and despondent, his small body hunched next to a dumpster. Tears streaming down both their faces, he picked up the little boy and hugged him until he yelped.

He called Rowena and let her know where he was. The EMTs confirmed that Nathan was all right, and his phone lit up with congratulatory messages.

The trial behind him, he went home to celebrate with his wife the return of their most precious treasure.

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Tina Kowalski

Alberta-based author Tina Kowalski is the author of multiple books, each of which blend humor, faith, and practical advice to help readers navigate life's awkward moments and find joy in even the most difficult situations.

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    Written by Tina Kowalski