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The Misguided Lover

The Fall of Marcus Antonius

By Jesse ShelleyPublished about a month ago 4 min read

October, Anno DCCXIV Ab Urbe Condita (A.U.C.)
October, 30 BCE

The scent of jasmine lingered in the air, mingling with the salt breeze drifting in from the Mediterranean. In Alexandria, the palace stood shimmering beneath the late sun — a monument to excess and decadence that belied the desperation that had settled in its golden halls.

Marcus Antonius, known to history as Marc Antony, stood on the balcony, staring out over the glittering sea. Cleopatra, his beloved Queen, was inside, preparing for another of her evening rites — a ritual she claimed would bring them victory against their enemies. There was an unspoken fear of something lurking behind these acts, something Marcus could not yet understand. But Marcus had his doubts.

The once-bold warrior had grown wary. His instincts, the instincts that had saved him countless times on the battlefield, were gnawing at him, warning him that something was wrong. He turned, looking into the dim interior of the palace, where Cleopatra’s silhouette moved against the flickering torchlight. Her face was serene, her movements graceful, but her eyes — those eyes he had loved — seemed distant and cold.

The rituals had grown more elaborate with each passing week. Cleopatra would disappear for hours, alone in her chambers, surrounded by her strange priests and whispering attendants. They spoke in a language Marcus did not understand, a tongue that seemed ancient, older even than Egypt itself.

“Beloved,” Cleopatra called, her voice like honey, pulling Marcus from his thoughts. She stepped onto the balcony, her robes flowing around her, her eyes shining in the dim light.

“Come,” she whispered, her fingers brushing his arm. “Join me tonight. I have seen our future, Marcus. I have seen us triumphant.”

Marcus wanted to believe her. He wanted to believe that their love could overcome the darkness that seemed to gather around them. He nodded, forcing a smile, and allowed her to lead him inside.

That night, Cleopatra led Marcus to the inner sanctum of the palace, a room he had never seen before. The walls were covered in intricate carvings, symbols that seemed to pulse and writhe in the torchlight. At the center of the room stood an altar, a slab of obsidian, its surface slick and dark.

“What is this place?” Marcus asked, his voice hushed, his eyes scanning the room.

“This is where our fate will be decided,” Cleopatra said, her voice almost a whisper, her eyes fixed on the altar. “Where we will claim our destiny, together.”

She turned to Marcus, her hands resting on his shoulders, her gaze piercing. There was something in her eyes, something dark and unfamiliar — a glint that sent a shiver down Marcus’s spine.

“Trust me, Marcus,” Cleopatra said, her voice soft, her lips curving into a smile. “This is for us. For our love.”

The air grew thick, the scent of incense filling Marcus’s lungs. He watched as Cleopatra moved to the altar, her fingers brushing over the obsidian, her lips moving in a whispered chant. The priests, their faces hidden beneath heavy hoods, moved around the room, their voices joining Cleopatra’s in a low, droning murmur.

Marcus felt his head grow heavy, his vision blurring. He took a step forward, his hand reaching out to steady himself against the wall. The symbols on the stone seemed to glow, the carvings twisting and shifting before his eyes.

“Cleopatra,” he said, his voice slurred, “what are you doing?”

Cleopatra turned to him, her eyes wide, her expression filled with something akin to regret. “It is necessary, Marcus,” she said. “It is the only way.”

Before Marcus could respond, the room seemed to tilt, the shadows deepening, the torches flickering. The priests moved closer, their hands reaching for him, their chants growing louder. Marcus struggled, his body growing weak, his breath coming in ragged gasps.

“Cleopatra,” he whispered, his vision fading, “why?” Not knowing what he was saying.

Marcus’s knees buckled, his body collapsing to the ground, his vision growing dark. He saw Cleopatra’s face above him, her eyes filled with tears, her lips moving in a final, whispered prayer.

The next morning, Cleopatra sat alone on the balcony, her eyes red from tears. The priests had left, the altar now cold and silent, the symbols on the walls fading to nothing. Marcus was gone — his body taken by the priests, his name already fading into the annals of history.

Cleopatra stared out at the sea, her heart hollow, her soul heavy. She realized that something dark was always lurking behind her decisions. Her fate was not her own, and now whatever had been pulling the strings was ready to claim its due.

Cleopatra felt her body weaken, her vision blur, the weight of what she had done pushing down on her mind. She tried to stand, but her body refused, as if some unseen force was keeping her pinned. The priests had not truly left — they were merely out of sight, their presence lingering. They moved closer now, their chants echoing in her ears.

She saw her reflection, her face twisting, her features shifting. Her memories began to fade, slipping away one by one — her childhood, her rise to power, Marcus. The scent of jasmine turned sour, her eyes growing vacant, her identity unraveling. Her servant stepped forward, her face now eerily similar to Cleopatra’s, her eyes vacant and obedient.

Cleopatra lost herself entirely, her thoughts scattered like dust in the wind. She was led away, down the hidden passages, into the dark streets of Rome — forgotten, nameless, empty. Her servant, now her perfect double, turned back to face the altar. The blade flashed in the dim torchlight, her throat slit in a swift, practiced motion, her body left there, lifeless.

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Jesse Shelley

Forensic Scientist. Knows where they’re buried, and won’t pretend otherwise... I dissect crimes and noir alike shaped by prompt rituals, investigative obsession, and narrative precision. Every story, a darker truth. Come closer.

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    Written by Jesse Shelley