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The Man who Rented Time

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By Dylan RickertPublished about a year ago • 2 min read

I first met the man who rented time on a Wednesday.

He wasn’t what you’d expect — not old, not young. Mid-thirties maybe. Wore a pressed shirt and corduroy pants, the kind that made him look like he either taught philosophy or had just quit a job he hated. He walked into the café like he owned the seconds ticking off everyone’s watches.

“Do you believe time can be borrowed?” he asked me, without introduction.

I blinked. “I’m sorry, what?”

“Borrowed. Not bought. Rented. Temporarily borrowed in exchange for something you don’t value right now.”

He had this briefcase with him — worn leather, cracked at the corners. When he opened it, I expected pamphlets, maybe a homemade time machine. Instead, he pulled out a watch. Not a smart one — a pocket watch, antique, silver, ticking softly like a secret.

“This is what I offer,” he said. “You rent an hour. I give it to you. You live it as you wish. And then, when the time is due, I take something in return.”

I was half-convinced this was some kind of street performance art. He handed me the watch.

“Try it. One hour. No cost. Just… give it back.”

I took the watch.

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Time Bent That Day

At 3:08 PM, I pressed the side button. Just curious. The café froze. I mean literally — the steam rising from the barista’s coffee pot hung in mid-air like a photograph. The sound vanished. Even my own breath felt disconnected from reality.

I walked out onto the street. Nothing moved. Cars paused mid-turn, birds stalled mid-air, a child frozen mid-laugh with soap bubbles around her head like a crown.

And then I felt it: freedom. Not just from time — from consequence. One hour, just mine.

I didn’t do anything drastic. Just walked. Touched the feathers of a pigeon caught in flight. Stared at my own reflection, wondering what I’d do if the hour never ended.

At 4:08 PM, the ticking resumed. Time flowed again. The man was gone. But the briefcase was at my table, a note taped to it:

“Return what you borrowed within seven days. Payment will be collected otherwise.”

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The Cost of Borrowed Time

Over the next few days, strange things happened.

I forgot my sister’s birthday — a date etched into me for years.

Then I misplaced a childhood memory — the one where my father taught me to ride a bike.

By day four, I couldn’t remember my first kiss.

Not who. Not when. Not even if it happened at all.

I panicked. Opened the briefcase. It was empty, except for the watch and a slip of paper:

“Every second borrowed is a memory lost. You took one hour. Sixty minutes. Sixty memories.”

I called every number I knew. Visited therapists. Cried into Google Docs at 3 AM, hoping to write my way back into who I was. But the memories didn’t come back.

On the seventh day, the man returned.

“Did you enjoy your hour?” he asked.

“No,” I told him.

“You will,” he said, and handed me a new watch. “This one lasts a day.”

I stared at it, tempted. Terrified.

“What’s the cost?”

He smiled. “You’ll forget asking that.”

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    Written by Dylan Rickert