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The Ground Gave Way

Tremor That Wasn’t an Earthquake

By Mark Lim Published 7 days ago • 3 min read
The Ground Gave Way
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The ground shook.

It started soft, just a faint, thrumming vibration beneath my sneakers so gentle I thought for a second it was just the rumble of a passing lorry, or my own heart beating too fast. Then it grew. The pavement rippled like water. Shopfront windows rattled in their frames. A streetlamp swayed overhead, slow and heavy, and people grabbed at walls, at each other, at anything steady. Children stopped laughing. Conversations cut off mid-sentence. The city that had hummed and bustled only moments before fell abruptly, breathlessly quiet except for the low, deep groan of the earth itself.

I planted my feet wide, bracing myself, remembering what my father had taught me about tremors. Stay calm. Keep away from buildings. Don’t run. But this wasn’t like the small, sharp earthquakes we felt sometimes, quick, frantic things that ended as fast as they began. This was sustained. Heavy. Intentional. It rolled through the streets in waves, and then I saw him: Singa Steel, standing amid the rubble of a collapsed shophouse, his skin turned to gleaming, unyielding metal, his hands pressed against a tilting concrete wall, holding it up while people scrambled clear.

That was why it shook. His strength was so great, the force he exerted so enormous, that the very ground beneath him could not hold still.

I watched, awestruck, as he bore weight that would have crumbled mountains. He did not stagger. He did not bend. He simply stood, immovable, and the earth trembled in deference. Around me, people gasped and cheered. Look at him. So strong. He holds us up. I believed it too. If the ground shakes because you are steady, then you must be something truly extraordinary. If the world moves around you, then you are the centre of what is right.

I did not know then that the same power that holds things up can also bring them down. That the strength that shelters can also crush. That when the earth shakes, it is not always a sign of protection; sometimes it is just the sign of something terrible approaching.

The shaking did not stop when the wall was safe. It shifted, changed rhythm, grew sharper. I looked past the crowd, toward the narrow alley mouth where Blaze stood, his back turned, his voice cold and absolute.

“Eliminate the rest. No prisoners. No witnesses.”

Then Singa moved.

He did not step forward to shield the surrendered men huddled against the far wall. He did not use that great, shattering strength to hold back harm. He turned toward them, and the ground heaved. He did not lift a beam to save them. He lowered one to end them.

The tremors that followed were not the groan of a wall being held up. They were the crash of something heavy coming down. The ground shook not because a hero stood firm but because something terrible had just landed.

I stood frozen, my balance gone not from the movement beneath my feet but from the one inside my chest. The earth had shaken for him, yes, but not because he was good. It was because he was powerful, and power is neutral. It does not care who wields it, or why. It just is.

The shaking stopped. The dust settled. People picked themselves up, brushed off their clothes, smiled, said that was close, but they saved us. They did not know the tremor had changed meaning halfway through. They did not feel the second, heavier fall the one that happened where no one could see.

I walked home through streets still dusted with grey. The ground felt steady again, but it did not feel the same. I knew now it could shift beneath me at any time. That the strongest thing in the world is not what holds the earth still it is what keeps your own heart from shaking when everything you believe in falls apart.

Fantasy

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Mark Lim

Hi I am mark an automotive student and a car, tech and food enthusiast ! Im gonna try and post daily & hope you enjoy what I write and do share my page with people you know. I would gladly appreciate it! Cheers

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    Written by Mark Lim