
I first heard about the orchard from an old man in the village. He had a voice like cracking wood and a face weathered by years of sun and sorrow. “Stay away from the orchard on Hollow Hill,” he warned, his cloudy eyes darting toward the distant rise. “The trees there… they don’t just grow. They watch.”
I laughed it off. Superstitions were common in the countryside, and I wasn’t one to believe in ghost stories. But when my car broke down a mile from the hill, and dusk was creeping in faster than I expected, I had little choice but to take the shortcut through the orchard.
The path was overgrown, the gnarled branches of the apple trees arching overhead like twisted fingers. Their fruit hung low, unnaturally perfect—round, red, and gleaming even in the fading light. The air smelled sweet but cloying, like rotting sugar.
I’d barely made it halfway through when I felt it: the unmistakable sensation of being watched. My steps faltered, and I turned, scanning the trees. Nothing moved, but the feeling wouldn’t shake. The apples seemed brighter now, their color almost too vivid. Some of them looked oddly misshapen, as though something pressed against their skins from the inside.
I picked up my pace.
The sun was gone by the time I reached the heart of the orchard. The light was dim, and the shadows between the trees seemed deeper than they should have been. That’s when I heard it: a soft, almost imperceptible sound. Like laughter, but wrong. Wet. Gurgling.
My breath quickened, and I broke into a jog, the sound growing louder with every step. And then I saw it.
One of the trees ahead wasn’t like the others. Its bark was pale and smooth, and its branches twisted unnaturally, forming the outline of a face. Two hollow knots stared down at me, and where its mouth should have been, the bark split in a wide, toothy grin.
The laughter stopped. Silence fell over the orchard like a heavy blanket.
I froze, my heart pounding in my chest. The tree’s grin widened, the split bark curling back to reveal sharp, wooden teeth. And then it moved. Slowly at first, creaking as its branches shifted, reaching for me.
I ran. Branches tore at my clothes, roots seemed to shift under my feet, and the laughter returned, louder now, echoing all around me. I didn’t look back. I couldn’t.
When I finally burst free of the orchard, the village lights were in sight. I collapsed onto the road, gasping for breath. The laughter had stopped, but I could still feel the weight of those hollow eyes watching me from the treeline.
I’ve avoided Hollow Hill ever since, but the nightmares haven’t stopped. Every night, I see the orchard, its trees grinning in the darkness. And every morning, I wake to find an apple on my windowsill—bright red, unnaturally perfect, and waiting.
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Maya
My name is Maya , I live in France, and I've been writing for over three years.
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