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The God of Death

Three Brothers

By Marian Clayton Published 2 years ago 4 min read
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Caelum sat on his throne observing the newly dead streaming through the gates; there were thousands that came walking, all with the same look of horror that comes from realising they were dead.

No creature is able to accept death, most come through with tears streaming down their face, others come screaming - begging to be taken back, to be given a second chance.

Caelum’s role was not in the judgment of their deeds, but simply in ruling over the souls, making sure the balance was held and that none escaped.

His eyes flickered over them, seeing all the sorrow, all the fear. It wasn’t pleasant for him, but neither did he care. It simply was.

His eyes roamed until they landed on a woman; her skin neither light nor dark, her hair tight curls that flowed around her head. She showed no fear, no sorrow. Her eyes showed numbness, she looked as if she had died in death, and this confused him.

He walked down from his throne, and wandered through the crowd of people, pushing them back as they grabbed at him, begging for help.

“Be gone!” He bellowed at all of them, and like a blink, they all disappeared.

All except her.

She didn’t even look up, didn’t seem to realise the crowd had gone. Caelum approached her, frowning.

“Do you understand what has happened?” He asked her softly. Only then did she look up, and the numbness didn’t leave her eyes.

“I just wanted the hopelessness to stop,” her voice was deflated, the words looked as if they had cost her last bit of energy as she fell to her knees.

He noticed the cuts across her wrists and kneeled across from her.

“And has it?”

“No.”

He got to his feet and walked until he was behind her, bending down he placed a hand on her shoulder, “may I?” Her shoulders shrugged. Taking this as permission he lifted her into his arms, and began the walk to his manor.

The land of death was a mix of grays and blues, a constant fog rolled along the ground and it resembled nothing of the land of living. The land of living was yellows and greens, a mixture of colour. Down here it simply was death.

The walk took no longer than a few minutes, choosing not to use his power of control of the land to manipulate the space between the Entrance to the manor for fear of frightening her.

Once they reached the huge wooden doors of the manor, which swung open to his presence, he put her on her feet. “This will be the first time a creature of the living has been to my home, will you give me the pleasure of escorting you inside?” Offering his hand to hers. Her eyes lingering on his hand a moment, before accepting, placing her hand in his and they entered.

The floor to the entrance was made of dark marble and shone as if freshly scrubbed, walking forward they passed a curved staircase alternating steps of black and grey. Caelum led the woman to a room, it was large with four walls, each wall decorated with a different work of art that covered floor to ceiling - Caelum didn’t notice the art anymore, after all they were his brother's stories. A fire blazed in the wall opposite the doorway, two cream arabesque chairs placed before it.

He sat in one and gestured at the other “please, sit”. She sat without complaint, her eyes staring at the fire. It showed the different hues of brown that mixed in them, a mixture of chestnut and hazel.

“Why have you brought me here?” She asked, for the first time she turned to face him, searching his face for answers. Caelum saw no use in lying to her, after all she was a dead soul and would soon need to be sent on.

“Because every day I sit on that throne and I watch millions of dead people walk by, I see them scream and cry, I see them sob and beg. Yet you? I saw nothing, I saw in your eyes the death that hasn’t yet reached you, and I see it now while I speak to you. There is a numbness there that I can’t read, something I’ve never experienced before. Yet I am the God of Death, I have been around since the start of time.

I brought you here for an explanation, I want to know why that look in your eyes haunts you. But if you cannot bear to speak of it then for now I would ask for your name?”

“Evelyn. Everyone used to call me Eve, but I don’t think I like that anymore.”

“You don’t like the name you were given, why?” Caelum leaned forward, his attention completely grasped by Evelyn.

“Because I’m dead, and so is Evelyn.” She turns back to the fire, the haunting in her eyes coming back in full force.

Fantasy
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Marian Clayton

Hello!

My main interests are Horror and Fantasy so if you're interested in creepy stories and fantastical worlds check out my stories!

(When I stop procrastinating and write them).

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  • Alex Hartman2 years ago

    Ok, intrigued...where are you going with this? I need more.

  • Let me know if you would like a part 2!

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