The Fable of Hilary Soames
A Campfire Ghost Story
Before our story begins, here is a short spooky poem to set the scene:
Are you sitting comfortably?
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The cabin in the woods had been abandoned for years, but one night, a candle burned in the window. At first, its flame was barely perceptible. A flicker. A glint. A nervous tremble in a pitch-black night.
Hi - lar - y Soames
Hi - lar - y Soames
The morbid breath of the night air moaned through the branches of the forest's old oak trees carrying with it a name.
A name from a memory.
Hi - lar - y Soames
Hi - lar - y Soames
Creaking and wincing, the boughs of the trees groaned at the chill from the wind. Full of ticker tape gossip, their twigs hurled themselves in protest at the old cabin's roof and walls.
The forest floor swirled anxiously. From a hundred forgotten falls, its stagnant and skeletal leaves rushed about in windswept chatter, huddling together under the old cabin's skirts.
Snarling, frustrated by the forest's snipes and sneers, the wind bit at the cabin's weathered boards, trying to reach the flickering candle.
Caught in the lash of its temper, the old, rusted lantern hung above the door started to clatter. Back and forth, back and forth it swung, screaming out in metronomic panic, desperate to escape its noose.
Inside, blinking and erratic, the candle's flame held on tight to its wick as the wind grasped at it, poked at it... fuelled its fire.
Hi - lar - y Soames
Hi - lar - y Soames
Welcome home Hilary Soames
Flashing, flickering, and gasping, the candle burned into the air, chasing the wind as it called to it.
Brighter, stronger, taller, longer the flame of the candle grew, reaching further and deeper into the dank cabin air, burning into it, holding on to it... owning it.
The wind wailed.
Goading the flame.
Igniting its fight.
They have thrown sticks
They have thrown stones
But it is the names that truly burn
The flame from the candle flared at the wind's taunts, sending out a burst of intense white light.
The glass in the window cracked in the heat and fell from its frame to the floor.
Freed from its wax and wick tether, with the wind at its back, the flame from the candle climbed out through the open window and licked the cabin's walls, tasting its bittersweet freedom.
Quickening and curious, the flame stretched out onto the porch, stroking the coarse splinters of the ramshackle floor, caressing its blistering paint. Before it, the dilapidated wooden roof struts rose in shadowy salute, and the balustrade of gnarled and broken spindles quivered into a row of shaking arrows.
The flame smiled widely as it confidently wrapped itself around them all.
The old metal lantern fell silent as its gallows started to burn.
Proud on the porch, spite wild in its sight, the flame stared out beyond the cabin into the army of trees.
The wind growled at its heels.
Hilary Soames
Hilary Soames
Who has got bones with Hilary Soames?
The army of oaks, stoic and mute, stared back.
Only the nervy jig of their shadows belied their unswerving calm.
The flame raised its arms and, with an almighty roar, incinerated what was left of the cabin.
The trees watched.
The wind respectfully paused.
Twirling and curling, surging with hedonism, the flame danced in gluttonous glory; hissing, spitting and crackling all over the old cabin's bones.
Not a twig dared move.
Not a leaf dared twitch
The forest watched as their long-time bedfellow burned.
Fat with power, the flame started to roll around on the ground. Becoming hotter, burning lower, its ferocious roar turning to a contented purr as it lapped its way across the cabin's grave.
The trees chanced a sigh.
The flame, lost in its reverie, languished in its pyre, exposing its underbelly, beneath which beat its glowing, fading heart.
From the ground, the burned-out flame looked up into the canopy of gloating trees. Feebly, it stretched its fingers towards them. Smug in their denseness, endless sameness, and sure-footed monotony the trees stood, motionless, and watched as the flame withered away.
Hilary Soames
Hilary Soames
Don't die alone
Hilary Soames
Mournfully, the wind nosed through the flame's fragile heart, whispering to it, stroking it, caressing its blackening embers.
The trees, breathing easier, swayed.
Their leaves and twigs returned to a hum of inconsequential conversation.
Dyeing, held within the arms of the musing breeze, the heart of the valiant flame collapsed into a thousand pieces.
Hi - lar - y Soames
Hi - lar - y Soames
Here lies the lost soul of Hilary Soames
The wind cried out in woeful howls gathering into its bellows the shards of the broken heart.
Then, like a Valkyrie, it rose high into the night sky, carrying with it a legion of fiery angels.
Higher and higher rose the fragments of the heart, riding into the darkness inside the breath of the wind.
Silently they floated.
Barely alive.
A trickling glow in a dead night sky.
Searching for a new home, a new start.
Beneath them, in a clearing by a river, they found a group of tents and trailers.
From inside one, they heard the echo of a small voice. A sobbing voice. A voice that spoke of a memory.
They have thrown sticks
They have thrown stones
Their names forever hurt me
Wherever you roam
Hilary Soames
I call on your ghost to free me
In a cascade of kindred spirits, the wind dropped its hellfire of vengeful angels onto the small campsite in the clearing.
Silently, stealthily, the tiny, flickering shards of the heart nestled alongside the other, sharing its misery, glowing in rhythmic sympathy.
Then, with the wind as its whip, the fledgling flame turned away from the sobbing voice and found its own.
Hilary is here
Hilary's come home
Now, who has made bones with Hilary Soames?
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Notes from the author:
The Fable of Hilary Soames is a short tale written for campfires with families.
Intended to be read aloud.
The presence of a fire brings to this tale a real-life illustration that a great narrator can draw from. Watching the flame's life cycle and adding in ghostly voices builds the storytelling atmosphere.
Hilary Soames is a warning to children (and adults) to speak kindly of others and to be mindful of the danger of an open flame.
Hilary Soames: The Poem ~ Transcript.
From dust to dust, from ashes to ashes
Hilary Soames' spirit never dies
Found in a flame's savage flashes
And amongst its withering cries
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A demon brought on the breath of the wind
Searching for its name
Rekindling wherever hope is dimmed
A vengeful, vindictive flame
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So, be wary all who hurt another
Brother, sister, father, mother
For Hilary Soames has no fear
They will right the wrongs of any tear
Thank you for reading.
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
Warm-blooded vertebrate, domesticated with a preference for the wild. Howls at the moon and forages on the dark side of it. Laughs like a hyena. Fuelled by good times and fairy dust. Writes obsessively with no holes barred.
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Comments (7)
So poetic!
I loved reading this. You can almost hear and see the terrifying haunting in your mind and through your eyes while reading it. This is a smashing story.
The way you paint a picture and imbue the flame with so much character is astounding. Excellent work!
I love the form of this almost like a chant as you fall through the story. Definitely a Challenge winner.
Fabulous!!!💖💕
Absolutely love the way you've laid it out. It's so senses enthralling. You can hear and see the whole thing unfolding perfectly. Terrifying to think the trees are watching their bedfellow burn and can do nothing about it. Bookended with context it really sparkles. Truly, well done!! <3
I'd not heard this fable. Very good. Your description of the fire a d winds is incredible. Well done.