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The Clockmaker’s Curse

Every tick was a warning. Every tock, a choice.

By M. Aizaz Ali. SPublished 2 years ago • 2 min read

In a crooked little shop nestled between two crumbling buildings on Ashmoor Lane, time did not flow—it coiled. Clocks of every shape and size lined the walls: brass pocket watches, elegant grandfather clocks, tiny cuckoos that chirped on the hour. They all ticked in perfect harmony, though none showed the correct time. Behind the counter sat Theo, a quiet man with soot-stained fingers and silver in his hair, though he was only twenty-seven. He inherited the shop from his grandfather, who had vanished the night the tower clock struck thirteen. Most people in town had long since abandoned mechanical time. They wore sleek digital bands, relied on phones and satellites. But those who needed something more… came to Theo. One rainy evening, a girl entered the shop. She couldn’t have been older than fifteen, with a coat two sizes too big and shoes soaked through. She stepped inside and stood still, listening. “Do you hear that?” she whispered. Theo looked up. “The clocks?” “No,” she said. “The pause between them.” Theo stared at her. “Who are you?” “Eira,” she said. “And I think I’m cursed.” He didn’t laugh. Not here. Not in this shop. “Show me.” She pulled out a pendant from beneath her shirt—a tiny glass orb with a single black gear suspended inside. It ticked once every hour. Theo recognized it instantly. “That’s from the Lost Line,” he murmured. “That’s not just a curse… that’s a contract.” Eira looked at him with wide, storm-gray eyes. “My parents made it before I was born. To save our family. They didn’t know it would bind me.” Theo took a breath. The Lost Line was an old tale—clockmakers who struck deals with Time itself, trading years for power, moments for money, and memories for protection. The gear inside Eira’s pendant marked every hour left in her life. And when it stopped ticking… “Can it be broken?” she asked. Theo hesitated. “No. But it can be reversed.” He pulled out a strange object from beneath the counter: a half-finished watch, its hands moving counterclockwise. “This can buy you time—but only if you give something in return.” Eira didn’t flinch. “What do you need?” “Your most precious moment.” Eira closed her eyes. “My seventh birthday,” she said quietly. “The last day my whole family was together.” Theo winced, but nodded. “Place your hand on the table.” The clock shop dimmed. The hands of every clock in the room spun backward, faster and faster, until they stopped all at once. Silence swallowed the shop. And then, tick. Theo attached the watch to the pendant. The gear spun faster, gaining strength. Eira’s shoulders relaxed. The curse slowed. But Theo knew better. She had bought time—but now she would never remember that birthday again. Her parents’ laughter. The cake. The song. All gone. Eira opened her eyes. “Did it work?” Theo nodded. “It worked.” She smiled sadly. “Thank you.” As she left, the clocks began ticking again—but one was out of sync. Theo looked at the half-finished watch and saw his own reflection in the polished brass. His hair had turned a little grayer. His fingers trembled slightly. He had paid part of the price. Because no one ever leaves the clock shop untouched.

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    Written by M. Aizaz Ali. S