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The Beholders Eye

This won't end well

By Brenton FPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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I met this cute girl one morning while I was taking a shortcut to the railway station. One thing led to another and we made wild and passionate love in the long grass next to the train tracks, like a pair of horny rabbits completely oblivious to the world. We easily did it in ten different positions in the first twenty minutes and continued until way after the sun had peaked high above us. We got caught up in each other, one of those "go with it" moments. I didn't get a blow job because I couldn't find her head.

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Brenton F

It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    Not in a million years would I have seen that coming! Lol!

  • Paul Stewart12 months ago

    uhm...bahaha this one tickled me!

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