The Bastarding Extra "i"
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Lisa had been very disaffected by "book club". She'd been all geared up for a night of deep discussion, only to discover that half of the women hadn't read it and the other half, who had read it, weren't willing to talk about it. The only mulling had been over wine and the only thing digested had been cheese.
There had been no literary consumption at all.
It had been held at her friend Yvette's house and she had had high hopes but, much as she liked Yvette, her book club had been little more than a gathering. Lisa had left early with a migraine, which wasn't far from the truth as talk of wayward husbands, nail parlours and holidays really did make her head hurt.
She decided that she would start her own Book Club and she had just the title, named after one of her favourite books.
But how to tell Yvette? Over coffee, she decided.
Yvette understood.
"I totally get it," she said, with a mouth full of fancy. "To be honest, I get bored too. Shellac soon wears thin."
Lisa was so relieved.
"So, you don't mind me setting up my own? I know some people who are interested and I thought I'd put some flyers up."
"Of course, I bloody don't! Tell you what, I'll even give you a hand with the flyers, get them printed and such. Give me an idea of what you want and I'll design something."
There was no denying Yvette's eye for design; it was good but Lisa had reservations about her attention to detail. But she felt churlish making demands when Yvette had been so magnanimous and found herself agreeing.
She told her the title and Yvette wrote it down.
A week later, the flyers were ready and Yvette distributed some to local places as a surprise for Lisa.
*
It was while Lisa was in the queue buying lemons that she saw the flyer and dropped the innocent fruit in alarm.
Yvette's flyer was perfect - except for the spelling:
Dangerous Liasons
Fellow shopgoers talked for weeks about the woman who stomped from the shop, kicking lemons and chuntering something about "the bastarding extra 'i'".
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You can thank Paul Stewart, my Vocal chum, for the title for this story, taken from a comment that he made on one of my pieces or his pieces - no matter. A comment was made and I liked the phrase so much that I felt it had to be used somehow.
You can check his vast body of unique and accomplished work here:
Thanks, Paul.
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Comments (8)
I keep looking for a double entendre my vocabulary is too impoverished to get? THere isnt one, is there? She's just being grumpy over the I and Yvette is possibly being a bit spiteful, yes?
🤣 This is hilarious! What a cool source of inspiration that you used to perfection! You established Lisa’s literary focus and attention to detail well so that final descriptor of her reaction to the poster is so golden!
Ha! You’ve got such an eye for character and detail. For some reason I see this going down in Waitrose! Have a great day.
And don't even get me started on dipthongs, which she must have been wearing as she stomped out of the store.
Good title indeed!
LOL! I thought...that's a great title...okay Ms Deeming, chum, you've suckered me in. I can't even remember the original comment...but I thank you for the shoutout and linking! This was a funny little slice of life piece and I'd have had the same annoyance and anger as Lisa! Well done. lol. And lie Dharrsh, this is why I hate collabing...especially leaving something like that to someone else.
Arghhh, no! I'm going to have nightmares now... Never let other people impose their spelling on you!
Hahahahahahahhaha this was hilarious! And that is why I always prefer to do all the work myself because I have trust issues. Loved your story!