T w o - F a c e d
Psychological Micro fiction
"For now on, "Suki Kawaza" is you." She caresses her check with both hands.
"I don't want you to die."
"I'm going to be a beautiful ghost, Suki."
"I don't like the fact your calling me 'Suki' already, it feels like I've already lost you."
"I love you, Suki."
"I love you too, Suki."
That's when Suki jumped off the building~
Not the Suki your eyes are perceiving.
However, the Suki you will never understand why she fled her flight to cross the other side.
In life, there is so much we can't control.
If she wanted to flee from the war ahead of her mind, no one could've stopped her~
Except for... the now named 'Suki'....
*KNOCK KNOCK*
"Hello?"- Suki opens the door.
....
"Oh... your...your...alive?"- The man at the door said confusingly.
"Well yes, of course I am.."
"But then...who's on the floor dead outside the apartment building?"
"You must've mistaken for someone else!"
Why didn't she stop her twin sister?
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About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical
~๐ข๐ฝ๐ธ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ท ๐ซ๐ฎ ๐ช ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ต๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐น~
Six Feet Under
Buried alive. What a horrible way to go. Yazz lay there, in her own thoughts. What else could she do? She was hungry, thirsty, tired, mentally, and physically exhausted, and more than anything, she was bored. She hoped she would die of boredom before anything else, anything else would've been more painful. Like many people had, she and her friends had talked about what they reckon the worst ways to die were, it was a morbid subject, but it came up every now and again. Yazz had always been one to argue her point on drowning, others had mentioned burning alive, slowly and painfully bleeding to death, hung drawn and quartered, and being starved to death. It was strange that none of them had considered being buried alive, it had never come up. But now, she was thinking back to those conversations her and her friends had had, how could they have not thought about it? It took a lot longer than the others, you were completely confined, you couldn't move or do anything, you just had to wait, until your body was physically unable to support a life system anymore, which could take up to four days. Four! By far the longest out of all of them. She recounted some of these conversations just to try and pass the time, anything to pass the time. It was difficult to know how much time had passed since she had been underground, it was difficult to know anything. There were many things that Yazz didn't know, she didn't know where she was, she didn't know how she'd got into the coffin, she'd just woken up there. Yazz also didn't know what time it was, or even what day it was, she guessed at Tuesday, it was Sunday evening when she'd been buried alive, intentionally, and although it had felt like weeks had passed, she was still alive, which means she hadn't died from dehydration, and therefore it couldn't have been more than four days.
By Liam Storm2 days ago in Fiction
Comments (22)
Good ending, but the desperation and callousness of the family too. This was a very good story.
So intense!! Loved it!
This kept me on the edge of the seat
I loved how you did this, you have a wonderful style all your own. What a great story.
Ooh, I thought it was all internal, how painful!
What an ending! It boggled my mind ๐ณ Congrats on top story!
Whoa! you got me!! ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Surprise ending!!! Loved ot!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Congrats on Top Story!๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ
Nice twist Kodah! This played with my mind for sure. Great top story!
Congrats on top story Kodah!!!!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Ha! The title has a much deeper meaning after reading the story, very clever! And congrats!
Great top story. Good on you Kodah! Fab twist!
Great story!
Wow! This is cold. But nice work on the ending. What are both named Suki-did I miss something, twins or not.
Boom. Woah. This is awesome. Well done Kodah and well done on Top Story!
Interesting twist! Iโm curious for a story now!! ๐๐ ๐คฃ Great story!
Whoaaaa, didn't expect it to be her twin sister! Loved your story!
The last line ๐จ!!! Well done , great micro fiction!
Nice twist , great story
"Not the Suki you eyes are perceiving".. a true twist!