There’s a switch, at the edge of consciousness, that flicks on when one crosses it, like a lightbulb, or a bomb. A blinding whiteness of nothing.
All of a sudden I feel hot, so very hot, and I start peeling off my coat. Wait, don’t. That’s not right. A distant voice. Is it mine? I frown at the white specks falling all around me. They come in waves, downwards and sideways, like a school of fish in the ocean. They seem soft and fluffy and I smile. Powdered sugar. It looks like powdered sugar.
“Tess.”
A hand tightens around mine. Funny how I didn’t notice it before. Come to think of it, I can’t feel my hands, nor my feet, for that matter. Am I laying down? The world seems a bit sideways. But it is hard to tell with all the sugar.
“I love you, Tess.”
Richard. Where is Richard? The distant voice again.
I think I hear music. Richard loves music. He used to play the cello. I listen to the soft hum of Le Cygne by Saint-Saens. Notes rise and fall with my breathing, like a metronome.
I feel ice-cold lips on my forehead, a full body hug.
“Richard?” I whisper.
“I’m here, darling.” Richard. He holds me tighter and I sigh, content.
I cuddle into my husband’s embrace and I sleep with a smile on my face, listening to the slowing thrum of his heartbeat. I close my eyes. I cannot keep them open any longer.
About the Creator
LC Minniti
Horror and Thriller writer in progress. Voracious reader. Lover of the dark, weird, and nerdy. Also coffee, I love coffee. And mugs.
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (4)
Love this. Evokes emotion. Could I once again narrate please?
Noooooo hypothermia!! You always said it could be the best way if someone were at end of life and wanted to go. Just drift off into a cold sleep (of course there would be discomfort first). Very well done!
This was so poignant and it tugged on my heartstrings. Loved your story!
Oof. Once again you have surprised my expectations! I thought it would be so much darker but this is heartbreaking in its purity. You did a wonderful job on this entry, LC. 💗