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Starlings

A Story Every Day in 2024 April 28th 119/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 15 days ago 2 min read
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Starlings
Photo by Daniil Komov on Unsplash

She was sat, having a coffee and gazing out of the window at the washing on the line. The sky was darkening. She should probably think about seeing if it was dry and getting it in. While she could.

A scattering of pigeon feathers littered the lawn. She hoped the pigeon was alright and the cats that chose to use her garden as the local lavatory had not, like a McDonald's, come to use the facilities and then left with the cat equivalent of a Big Mac. If they did, they could have at least have taken their litter with them.

She was procrastinating.

She had a call to make. It was literally life or death. Dramatic but true. Her results had come back and it was not good. Deadly, in fact. Terminal. The only terminal she had had to deal with at this point was in airports. And train stations? Did they have terminals in train stations? Or was that terminus?

She wondered at her mind's capacity to drift and if it was her consciousness' way of manifesting her cowardice.

Not that she wouldn't confront her own demise. Eventually. She smiled at her own ironic wit. Because, of course, we all confront our end. Eventually. She just didn't want to know the sentence she would be given before meeting hers.

But there was a drug to delay the inevitable; it was expensive. The doctor said she might be eligible for some free treatment, and pay for the rest. She didn't have all the money needed. Nobody she knew had the money to lend. She didn't want her family to be saddled with a debt if her treatment wasn't successful.

Pharmaceutical companies were providing hope, and then profiteering from it. They were dangling a very large carrot but charging exorbitantly for a nibble.

They had you on a golden hook.

Starlings flew onto the grass. She watched one pull a worm out of the soil. It held it in its beak and she could see the worm writhing, trying to save itself. The starling was holding it firm, never letting go.

She sighed. She dialled. She was put through to the doctor.

"Any news?"

"I'm afraid..."

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366 words

A sad tale. I can't believe that people are facing this and yet, I can.

And whilst I've used the starlings in this story as a metaphor, they too are in decline and this is a shame. Perhaps not for worms but in terms of the fact that they are the Liberace of the bird world. Look at that plumage, the iridescence, the flamboyance, the colour. But also the fact that they provide one of nature's most wonderful spectacles: a murmuration.

If you get a chance, watch the video:

Thanks for stopping by! If you do read this, please do leave a comment as I love to interact with my readers.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶10 days ago

    Sad story… I’m grateful to have affordable treatment readily available. I’ve seen murmurations of birds but never knew the word for it. Impressive video clip.

  • D.K. Shepard13 days ago

    Astute commentary on a major issue! “They were dangling a very large carrot but charging exorbitantly for a nibble” was an excellent metaphor. Loved the incorporation of starlings and enjoyed the video!

  • Katarzyna Popiel14 days ago

    I liked how, at the end, by not telling the reader anything you actually tell it all. Nice work!

  • That was so sad yet the reality of many. Loved your story!

  • Hannah Moore15 days ago

    I feel like you've deflected from the awful ess of the feeling you've evoked with your authors note there! Wandering from the difficult, just like your protagonist.

  • Ameer Bibi15 days ago

    Your story was so relatable and interesting feel sad for starlings

  • Well-wrought! And an apt metaphor, the poor worm... I love seeing murmurations in the skies here. Though I suspect it might be a mosh pit. Music so heavy it falls from space like a hammer and blows their little minds. Cosmic Metal for Starlings!

  • John Cox15 days ago

    I had the good fortune to witness a murmuration twice at the same location while traveling to see my wife, daughter, son-in-law and new grandson in Connecticut. Crossing the same bridge driving north around 7:00 am, the sky literally darkened with birds as far as I could see from east to west. Both times the birds were flying west. I unconsciously held my breath as I watched them paint moving images across the sky in their hundreds of thousands.

  • Caroline Craven15 days ago

    Hmm. Living in the US, I’m always staggered by the cost of health care. This story was so relatable and relevant. Unfortunately. Excellent writing Rachel.

  • Well written! I hope they don’t decline 🥲

  • Lana V Lynx15 days ago

    So sad, for both the woman and the starlings.

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