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She was Still a woman!

Escaped and Sailing through the Blue...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
She was Still a woman!
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The outside world was unknown to her, but she could see a glimpse of it through the window in his room.

My Mom had been captured by humans and she gave birth to me...

Sadly, she passed away so shortly after I Turned 15, she left me here to Fin for me...

She taught me a lot of Basic specialties and Women's differentials...

I loved when she would tell me stories about my Father... I always would crave more!

I had never been to the seas...had I known about the escape long ago, Mom would be here with me now🧜‍♀️🌊

All of a sudden, harmony started to recreate in the moment she swim through the deep...

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Comments (16)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh, this is a beautiful story. Well done.

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Are we in the world of the little mermaid? How is this music magically playing?? ✨✨

  • Susana's Worldabout a year ago

    I feel this ...beautiful.

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Beautiful work lil bro!

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Ooh fascinating! I love this storyline, so intriguing.

  • Lily Collinsabout a year ago

    Amazing Job Lonzo! Loved reading this! ❤️💯

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Sad and lovely story Lonzo. 💖🎈

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    A very imaginative and evocative tale. Well done, Lonzo!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    This is very haunting 😢

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Excellent! This was sad, mysterious and hopeful. 💖

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Sad, yet so beautiful! A very intriguing story ❤️

  • Poignant.

  • This was so poignant! I loved it!

  • Sandra Tena Coleabout a year ago

    How evocative! ❣️

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    So lovely, yet so sad. 💛❤💙

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Beautiful ❤️

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