She was Still a woman!
Escaped and Sailing through the Blue...
The outside world was unknown to her, but she could see a glimpse of it through the window in his room.
My Mom had been captured by humans and she gave birth to me...
Sadly, she passed away so shortly after I Turned 15, she left me here to Fin for me...
She taught me a lot of Basic specialties and Women's differentials...
I loved when she would tell me stories about my Father... I always would crave more!
I had never been to the seas...had I known about the escape long ago, Mom would be here with me now🧜♀️🌊
All of a sudden, harmony started to recreate in the moment she swim through the deep...
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Are we in the world of the little mermaid? How is this music magically playing?? ✨✨
I feel this ...beautiful.
Beautiful work lil bro!
Ooh fascinating! I love this storyline, so intriguing.
Amazing Job Lonzo! Loved reading this! ❤️💯
Sad and lovely story Lonzo. 💖🎈
A very imaginative and evocative tale. Well done, Lonzo!
This is very haunting 😢
Excellent! This was sad, mysterious and hopeful. 💖
Sad, yet so beautiful! A very intriguing story ❤️
Poignant.
This was so poignant! I loved it!
How evocative! ❣️
So lovely, yet so sad. 💛❤💙
Beautiful ❤️