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She was Still a woman!

Escaped and Sailing through the Blue...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 16 days ago • Updated 10 days ago • 1 min read
She was Still a woman!
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The outside world was unknown to her, but she could see a glimpse of it through the window in his room.

My Mom had been captured by humans and she gave birth to me...

Sadly, she passed away so shortly after I Turned 15, she left me here to Fin for me...

She taught me a lot of Basic specialties and Women's differentials...

I loved when she would tell me stories about my Father... I always would crave more!

I had never been to the seas...had I known about the escape long ago, Mom would be here with me now🧜‍♀️🌊

All of a sudden, harmony started to recreate in the moment she swim through the deep...

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Comments (15)

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  • Grz Colm11 days ago

    Are we in the world of the little mermaid? How is this music magically playing?? ✨✨

  • Susana's World15 days ago

    I feel this ...beautiful.

  • Tiffany Gordon 16 days ago

    Beautiful work lil bro!

  • Ooh fascinating! I love this storyline, so intriguing.

  • Lily Collins16 days ago

    Amazing Job Lonzo! Loved reading this! ❤️💯

  • Roy Stevens16 days ago

    Sad and lovely story Lonzo. 💖🎈

  • Dana Crandell16 days ago

    A very imaginative and evocative tale. Well done, Lonzo!

  • Donna Renee16 days ago

    This is very haunting 😢

  • Lamar Wiggins16 days ago

    Excellent! This was sad, mysterious and hopeful. 💖

  • Gina C.16 days ago

    Sad, yet so beautiful! A very intriguing story ❤️

  • Poignant.

  • This was so poignant! I loved it!

  • Sandra Tena Cole16 days ago

    How evocative! ❣️

  • Novel Allen16 days ago

    So lovely, yet so sad. 💛❤💙

  • Dana Stewart16 days ago

    Beautiful ❤️

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