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Safety First

Saves Lives and Heartache

By Thavien YliasterPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Safety First
Photo by Sonia Kowsar on Unsplash

"I'mma dip."

"Really? In this kind of weather?"

"It's just a little windy, is all. I promise."

"Make sure you bring your cap."

"Yeah, yeah..." As he headed out, he could feel the current whipping at him. Heading into open waters, the sunlight fluttered through brief breaks in the clouds. "Not as bad as she said it was."

As he continued about his stroll throughout the water, he could feel the rolling waves crash upon him.

Sensing a draft of cold sweep over him, he looked up, "Sun's still shining. Why's it getting darker?"

CRUNCH!

Heartbroken, his mother found him.

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Oh no, poor little critter.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)9 months ago

    Talk about flash fiction, what a quick set up and twist ending! Took a couple reads but I realized this was narrated by something that got squished by a human... great twist in perspective! Was unexpected and fun to figure out!

  • Emma Kate Coleman10 months ago

    Oh my GOSH. This is incredibly heart-wrenching. Way to move mountains with so few words!! 👏🙂

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  • Donna Renee10 months ago

    Oh nooo 😩🫣

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