I kept running through the woods. My friend had already been eaten by the beast. It was so dark out, I coudnt even see it’s face to describe. There it was, the entrance to the state park. I was almost there. The beast popped up in front of me, it’s face now glowing. I was standing there, stoic, as it swallowed me whole.
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Alex H Mittelman
I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ
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