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Twin Flames

By Jorge Madera Published 2 years ago • 2 min read

Sure, here's a revised version of the script: --- [Music] What’s this? What are you listening to? Look, I don’t care. Don’t ever call me again. Just get out. Uh, hey, are you alright? Do you think this is okay? Nothing is okay. Sorry, I lashed out at you. Oh, it’s alright. Are you okay? Yeah, sorry about that. Excuse me, can I use your phone? Mine’s... oh, actually, I don’t have it right now. Same thing happened to me yesterday—my heel broke. I took it to get repaired. There’s a service center around the corner if you want to go there. Okay, thanks. Sorry again. Ow! Are you bleeding? I don’t know. Yeah, take this. Yesterday was a rough day. How do you girls walk in those heels? It’s beyond my understanding. This was my first time wearing them and probably my last. Oh, I have the same sneakers! I miss mine so much right now. They burned the day before. Burned? Yeah, I stepped on an open wire during a shoot. Oh, mine were burned by a curling iron while I was on a shoot. So, you’re a filmmaker or photographer? Yeah. It’s strange, but accidents do happen. Yeah, they do. I’ve always been accident-prone. I would fall off my bike, get hit by a cricket ball, and after a few severe burns when I was 10, I decided to stay away from firecrackers. There was a time I questioned what was wrong with me. I remember a gathering near my house where I was the unlucky one to get food poisoning and ended up in the hospital for two weeks. How do you know all that? This is freaking me out. Sorry, I didn’t mean to. Hi, where did you grow up? Here. I thought you might say Delhi. Anyway, your birthday is in January. Yeah, thank God. I’m an Aquarius. Tea or coffee? Coffee. Morning person or night person? I usually wake up at noon. I’m afraid to ask you anything else right now. Hi, I’m N. Hi, I’m Alm. Nice to meet you. Nice to meet you too. Can you show me the way to the service center? Oh, I saw it in a movie. I’m sorry, it was an impulse. So, you broke it? Yeah, the service center is that way. I’m sorry. Never mind. If I may ask, who was that person you were lashing out at? Some other time. [Music]

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    Written by Jorge Madera