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Precision of the Hunt

chapter 17

By Forest GreenPublished 7 days ago • 3 min read
Precision of the Hunt
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Murphy didn’t open the car doors. He sat in the heavy silence of the basement, the engine ticking as it cooled, while he stared at the concrete wall of the garage. He had spent his life believing that the law was a solid structure, something you could lean on. Now, he felt as if he were leaning on a ghost.

"If you take us inside," the operator in the back said, his voice devoid of threat but brimming with a clinical sort of truth, "you're just returning property to its owner. Sterling will thank you for the 'recovery,' we'll be processed through a back door, and you'll be given a commendation for a job well done. You'll be a hero in a story written by the people who played you."

Murphy gripped the steering wheel until his knuckles turned white. The thought of that commendation—a shiny piece of metal for being a useful idiot—made his stomach churn. He knew the rhythm of the precinct; he knew how the paperwork flowed and where it stopped. If he entered the front doors now, he was handing over his only leverage to a man who viewed him as a liability.

"Get out," Murphy commanded. He didn't unlock the doors immediately, letting the silence stretch. He needed to be sure he wasn't just reacting to the operator's provocation. He was thinking about the Sirocco, the forty-minute blackout, and the way Sterling had looked at him—not with the anger of a superior, but with the impatience of a man waiting for a slow clock to tick.

He popped the locks. The four men exited the sedan with a synchronized lack of urgency. They didn't resist; they didn't even look concerned. They simply stood in the dim light of the garage, their tactical gear blending into the gray concrete.

"Where are we going, Detective?" the man in the charcoal jacket asked. "The booking desk is that way." He pointed a thumb toward the elevators.

"Not today," Murphy said. He stepped out of the car and closed the door with a heavy thud. He didn't lead them toward the precinct. Instead, he marched them toward the far end of the garage, past the rows of unmarked cruisers and the leaking pipes, toward a small, secure evidence locker that had been decommissioned years ago. It was a concrete box with a heavy iron door, used for storing hazardous materials before the city updated its codes.

Murphy didn’t let the men enter the locker; he simply used the heavy iron door as a backdrop, pinning the lead operator against it with a forearm across his chest. The other three guards stood in a loose semi-circle, their eyes scanning the dimness of the garage. They were out of their element now, stripped of the tactical advantage of the warehouse and the cover of the mist. Here, in the belly of the precinct, they were merely intruders in a house of law.

"You’re not taking us to booking," the man in the charcoal jacket noted. His voice remained flat, but there was a flicker of curiosity in his gaze. "This isn't a processing center. This is a storage closet."

"It's a place where things get forgotten," Murphy replied, his voice low and dangerous. "Which is exactly where you're going to stay until I find out who signed the check for the Sirocco. Now, let’s talk about the 'asset' in the box. Was it a person, or something that just looks like a person on a manifest?"

The operator let out a short, sharp exhale. "You're gambling, Detective. You think by holding us here, in the shadows of your own precinct, you're safe. But you've just created a blind spot. Sterling knows you're back, but he doesn't know where you are. If we disappear for an hour, he’ll assume you’re playing a game. If we disappear for three, he’ll realize he has a leak in his plumbing."

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green