Old Bill
A legend lives among the cypress in the Everglades.
Old Bill
D. A. Ratliff
Johnny Tiger slowly paddled his canoe through the thick cypress trees, relishing the solitude. Solitude if he didn’t count the chatter of egrets and herons disturbed by his presence. He didn’t want to do what he agreed to do, but Miami-Dade Animal Control wanted Old Bill found, and they paid well for his services.
Johnny had been an animal tracker for the Miccosukee Nation since he had been old enough to follow his grandfather around. The Miccosukee Tribal police chief asked him to help the Miami-Dade officers find Old Bill. A group of frat brothers from the University of Miami reported one of their friends missing. The college students were partying and, by some reports, target shooting in the Glades when a drunken young man tumbled out of one of the boats.
A few hours later, a tourist airboat discovered a dismembered arm perforated with huge teeth marks. The size of the teeth marks led to only one conclusion. The culprit was Old Bill, the predatory monster rumored to have roamed the Glades for over forty years. Trackers nicknamed the creature Old Bill after Bill Harnett, the Glades guide who vowed to kill the sixteen-foot animal. Harnet disappeared into the Everglades and never came out. Days later, another guide spotted the giant creature, and the nickname was born.
Brushing the thick over-hanging Spanish moss out of his face, Johnny slowed his paddling to a crawl. Sunlight filtered through the towering cypress trees, and the rustle of wings caught his attention. Looking up, he saw an imposing anhinga spreading its magnificent black-and-white wings to dry after fishing for food. He smiled. There was no place on Earth he’d rather be than deep in the Everglades. It was early morning, the temperature hot but not scorching, which gave Johnny hope the natives would be restless and Bill active. In the area where the arm was found, he nudged the canoe against a cypress tree stump and waited.
An hour passed before he caught a glimpse of shiny black eyes glinting on the water’s surface. Staying very still, he waited until the underwater shadow neared the canoe to make sure it was Bill. It was. The shape in the water was considerably longer than his twelve-foot canoe.
As Johnny reached for his rifle, remorse flowed through him. He didn’t want to take the life of this magnificent relic. His grandfather taught him that every creature was precious and must be preserved. He wasn’t convinced that killing Bill was the right thing to do.
Old Bill seemed to sense danger, and with a quick splash of his thickly armored tail, he turned, swimming away. Johnny laid down the rifle and paddled after the big guy. Approaching a wide spot between the cypress trees, he noted Bill slowed down. Peering toward the bank, he saw a patch of blue in the tangled roots.
Johnny rowed to the spot, shocked to find the blue fabric attached to a body missing a left arm. Maneuvering the canoe to the gap in the trees, he realized the body was wedged into the roots. Old Bill apparently attempted to drag the body underwater when it became lodged.
Taking a closer look, Johnny whistled. A bullet hole sat dead center in the man’s chest. Grabbing the radio, he called the Tribal police. “Chief, send some people out. I found the body. Bill didn’t do this. The guy was shot.”
Old Bill lurked a distance away, and Johnny yelled out to him. “Go away, Old Bill. Your sentence has been commuted. Today you live.”
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The Everglades consists of two million acres located on the Southern Florida peninsula. The sub-tropical wetlands consist of native lands and the magnificent Everglade National Park and offer miles of nature trails and recreational opportunities for all. Spot an anhinga, ride an airboat, or wrestle an alligator. A trip to the Everglade is always fun but bring mosquito spray! Who knows, you might see Old Bill.
https://www.nwf.org/Educational-Resources/Wildlife-Guide/Wild-Places/Everglades
About the Creator
D. A. Ratliff
A Southerner with saltwater in her veins, Deborah lives in the Florida sun and writes murder mysteries. She is published in several anthologies and her first novel, Crescent City Lies, is scheduled for release in 2024.
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Wonderful storytelling, heartfelt and engaging. A true story of man and beast at one with nature. As ever you transported your reader right into the centre of the action, time and place. I would love to visit the Everglades and now I have.