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New Arrival

An otherworldly visitor.

By Jason Ray Morton Published 12 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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New Arrival
Photo by Catalin Pop on Unsplash

Jeff was camping when he heard the sirens from the city. Something was very wrong. He tuned his radio and the announcement warned citizens of Hart’s Bay to seek shelter. An asteroid was headed toward the city.

“Boom!”

He heard something exploding in the sky overhead. Crawling out of his tent, Jeff could see it wasn’t the city that was at risk. He hurried to a nearby cave with only seconds to spare.

When he came out, the woods were on fire. Something was moving, crawling from the crash. In his last moment, he saw her face.

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About the Creator

Jason Ray Morton

I have always enjoyed writing and exploring new ideas, new beliefs, and the dreams that rattle around inside my head. I have enjoyed the current state of science, human progress, fantasy and existence and write about them when I can.

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Comments (42)

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  • Sandra Tena Cole12 months ago

    This is brilliant! You got the microfiction mastery! ❣️

  • Komal12 months ago

    Amazing !

  • Signor Wilson12 months ago

    nice piece, but the story has no end.

  • AGB12 months ago

    Wow, this can be the beginning of book! Well done. Congrats on your TS!

  • Sinenjabulo Mgade12 months ago

    great story

  • Great

  • Walk, Love, Sparkle12 months ago

    Great work! I want to know more! ~:0)

  • Loryne Andawey12 months ago

    Oh shit! Terminator 3! (or at least how it could have started) Well done!

  • Mahnoor Siddiqui12 months ago

    what an awesome piece!

  • Kushagra yadav12 months ago

    You doing awesome job.

  • Sara Wilson12 months ago

    Creepy! I love it :D

  • Ahamed Thousif12 months ago

    Jason, this is amazing... I really enjoyed reading this... And well done for your work.

  • good article

  • Jeff koli12 months ago

    https://vocal.media/fiction/what-if-you-already-met-a-time-traveler

  • Jeff koli12 months ago

    niiice

  • Mark Gagnon12 months ago

    My favorite genre! Once again congrats on top story.

  • Heather Hubler12 months ago

    Well that got my blood pumping!! Great work ratcheting the tension so high right from the beginning. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • J. S. Wade12 months ago

    Predators wife is here and she’s pissed. 😀.

  • Lamar Wiggins12 months ago

    Previously read and hearted. I enjoyed the reread. Congrats, Jason.

  • Abraham Adesanya12 months ago

    Short but t loaded

  • Gal Mux12 months ago

    Ok now we went the full story...

  • Gina C.12 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!! ❤️

  • Anitha12 months ago

    Nice 👍

  • Inkweaver12 months ago

    If anyone wants to read my stories please visit my profile ❤️ ❤️

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