My Dog Is Addicted To Killing Mice
He Hunts Them In The Basement
We were sitting in the basement, just me and my dog Rex. It was dark and spooky down there, and I was trying to summon up the courage to go explore the rest of the house. But Rex was getting restless, and I didn't want to leave him alone.
"Come on, Tom," he said. "Let's go explore. I bet there are all kinds of interesting things to see upstairs."
I hesitated for a moment, but then I realized that Rex was right. There was no point in sitting in the dark when there was so much to see.
"All right, let's go," I said, getting to my feet.
Rex bounded up the stairs ahead of me, and I followed close behind. I was half-expecting something to jump out at me, but nothing did.
We reached the top of the stairs and I looked around. There was a long hallway with doors leading off of it.
"Which way should we go?" I asked Rex.
He sniffed the air for a moment and then trotted off to the right. I followed him down the hallway until we came to a door that was slightly ajar.
Rex pushed it open with his nose and I peered into the room. It looked like it might have been a nursery at one time. There was a crib in one corner and a changing table in another.
I was about to step into the room when Rex suddenly stopped and growled. I froze, my heart pounding in my chest.
"What is it, boy?" I whispered.
Rex's growl turned into a bark, and he lunged forward into the room. I heard a shriek, and then Rex came running back out, something small and furry clutched in his mouth.
"Rex, no!" I scolded him. "You're supposed to be a good dog!"
But Rex just wagged his tail and dropped the furry thing at my feet. I bent down and picked it up, and my heart skipped a beat when I realized what it was.
It was a mouse, and it was still alive.
The next morning, I woke up to the sun shining in my face. I yawned and stretched and got out of bed. Rex was already up and waiting for me at the door.
"Come on, boy," I said. "Let's go explore some more."
Rex barked excitedly and followed me downstairs. I opened the door to the basement and we started down the stairs. But halfway down, I stopped and Rex bumped into me.
"What is it?" he asked.
I didn't answer. I was trying to listen, but I couldn't hear anything. It was like the house was completely silent.
"Hello?" I called out. "Is anyone there?"
There was no answer.
I started to feel a little uneasy, but I told myself not to be ridiculous. There was nothing to be afraid of.
I took a few more steps down, but Rex was reluctant to follow.
"Come on, boy," I said. "There's nothing down here that can hurt us."
But Rex just stood there, barking and growling.
"Fine," I said. "You can stay up here if you want. I'm going to explore the basement."
I started down the stairs again, but I was moving more slowly now. My heart was pounding in my chest, and I was starting to regret coming down here alone.
I was almost to the bottom when I heard it. A noise that sounded like something scratching at the walls.
I froze, my heart racing.
"Hello?" I called out again. "Is anyone there?"
There was no answer, but the scratching noise continued.
I was about to turn and run back up the stairs when Rex suddenly appeared at the bottom of the stairs.
"Rex, you scared me!" I exclaimed.
"I'm sorry," he said. "But I thought you might need some help."
I was about to tell him that I didn't need any help, but then I heard the scratching noise again.
"What is that?" I asked, my voice trembling.
Rex sniffed the air for a moment and then he started to growl.
"It's coming from over there," he said, nodding his head towards a door in the far corner of the basement.
My heart was pounding in my chest, but I forced myself to move forward. Rex was right behind me, his growls getting louder and more aggressive.
I reached the door and grasped the handle, but I hesitated for a moment. I was scared of what might be on the other side.
But then I took a deep breath and turned the handle.
The door opened with a creak, and I peered into the darkness.
"Hello?" I called out. "Is anyone there?"
There was no answer, but I heard the scratching noise again.
I took a step into the room, and Rex followed. As my eyes adjusted to the darkness, I saw that the room was filled with all kinds of boxes and old furniture.
And in the far corner, something was moving.
I took a few steps closer, and Rex started to growl again.
I could see now that it was a rat. A big, fat rat.
It was scratching at the wall, and it didn't seem to notice us.
I was about to turn and run when Rex lunged forward and grabbed the rat in his mouth.
"Rex, no!" I shouted.
But it was too late. Rex had already killed the rat.
I started to cry. I had never been so scared in my life.
I ran out of the building and didn't stop until I got home. I was shaking and covered in sweat, and Rex followed close behind me.
I went inside and lay down on my bed, trying to calm my nerves. Rex jumped up next to me and put his head on my chest.
"It's okay, boy," I said, stroking his fur. "You're a good dog. A really good dog."
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Comments (3)
Entertaining fictional read! Loved it. Very suspenseful.
I loved this story! Super entertaining compared to the generic backstories a lot of people have been putting out there for the challenge, great work!
This was a spooky and fun story. I loved it!