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Monster Girl

Ignoring the warnings, influenced by a sense of compassion, Sophia accepted the burden of the curse.

By Eduarda RodriguesPublished 4 months ago 3 min read
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In the quiet village of Ravensbrook, a dark legend loomed over an isolated mansion atop a hill. It was said that a monster inhabited that place, a cursed girl known as the "Monster Girl." Residents avoided speaking of her, but stories echoed like frightened whispers on silent nights.

On a stormy night, Sophia, a fearless young woman, decided to defy the warnings and explore the abandoned mansion. Curiosity consumed her, and she believed that unraveling the secrets of the Monster Girl could make sense of her own tumultuous life.

Upon entering the mansion, Sophia felt a dark presence hanging in the air. Empty and dark corridors stretched before her, while creaking floorboards echoed like a subtle lament. A dusty portrait in the hallway depicted the Monster Girl, a child with vacant eyes and hair as dark as the night.

As Sophia explored the decaying rooms, distant laughter and solitary cries filled the air. The atmosphere grew denser, and shadows danced on the walls like restless specters. Nevertheless, Sophia persisted, determined to uncover the mystery behind the legend.

In the heart of the mansion, she found a partially open door. Pushing it, she encountered a room shrouded in darkness. A huddled figure in the corner muttered incomprehensible words. It was the Monster Girl, a deformed creature with dull eyes and sharp claws.

Upon seeing Sophia, the Monster Girl let out a melancholic moan. The walls seemed to vibrate with the tormented lament of the cursed creature. Despite the fear that enveloped her, Sophia felt an inexplicable empathy for the Monster Girl.

The creature revealed its tragic story. Once an innocent child loved by her parents, an ancestral curse had transformed her into an aberration. The villagers of Ravensbrook, consumed by fear and superstition, had isolated her in that mansion, condemning her to eternal solitude.

Touched by the tragic narrative, Sophia offered to free the Monster Girl. However, the creature warned of the price to be paid. By releasing her, the curse would transfer to Sophia, condemning her to a monstrous existence.

Ignoring the warnings, influenced by a sense of compassion, Sophia accepted the burden of the curse. The moment the last chain was broken, the mansion trembled, and the shadows contorted. The Monster Girl faded away, leaving behind a sense of emptiness.

Time passed, and Ravensbrook forgot the legend of the Monster Girl. However, a new story emerged: the curse had found a new host. Sophia, now a distorted creature, wandered the mansion, trapped in an existence where horror and loneliness were her only companions.

The village returned to its routine, but a dark aura hung over the abandoned mansion. Nightly whispers still echoed, recounting the tale of the girl who became a monster, a story now rewritten with Sophia's tragedy.

The true nature of the curse was revealed: those who sought to unravel the mystery became a part of it. The Monster Girl's story continued, now with Sophia as the protagonist, condemned to an eternal existence in the darkness that once lured her with promises of compassion and redemption. The horror in Ravensbrook Mansion persisted, fueled by the tragedy of a young woman who sacrificed herself for compassion, only to find her own eternal nightmare.

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Eduarda Rodrigues

Hello, I am 20 years old. I really enjoy writing stories, poems, and giving advice!

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