Fiction logo

"Mistake in Belief!

Belief In Love

By NikolasPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

Episode 1

"Mistake in Belief!

The two main characters of this story are Surya and Monali. Both of them love each other deeply.

They study in the same college. They cannot spend a single day without seeing each other. No matter what,

their relationship is like this, conversation, and so on.

One day they went to spend some leisure time at a secluded place named Jia Uddan.

They sat very close:

Surya: Why are you so beautiful?

Monali: Because your eyes are beautiful, you understand.

Surya: How much do you love me?

Monali: What do you mean?

Surya: I mean don't you understand, how much, two kilos or ten kilos??

Monali: You are teasing me, darling. Can love be measured?

Surya: Still, I want to know, how much does my beloved love me?

Monali: See, I can't express how much I love you. But this much you should know,

no other man will come into my life besides you. Hearing this, Surya burst into laughter

and seeing that -

Monali: Why are you laughing? Your laughter is unbearable.

Surya: Everyone says such things at first, but later nothing happens. There is doubt about waiting for two or three

months.

Monali: Will you stop talking nonsense or should I leave?

Surya: Why are you angry, I just had some fun with you. Suddenly they faced each other

with a middle-aged man or an internal scene of a sixteen or seventeen-year-old girl

caught Surya's eye and his mood changed, and for their purpose

he said - Look at the mess of that old man's daughter, she's hanging out with a girl. Let's go make a complaint,

what's it to us? Let's leave from here.

Surya: Why?

Monali: Understand so much and can't you understand this, we may not have sense but they do."

"Alright, let's go.

Surya's father is a government employee. He works day and night to meet the expenses of their education. Except for Sundays, he hardly gets the opportunity to talk to his son and daughter properly. So, he loves to spend the day off with his family. Whenever in the morning his mother was waking his father up from sleep, Surya would ask her: Mom, where are you going?

Mother: I am going to wake your father up from sleep.

Surya: Why? What's the need? Tell me.

Mother: We need to go to the market. If we don't go early in the morning, we won't get fresh vegetables.

Surya: Alright, there's no need to call Dad for me.

Even while eating at the dining table,

Father: Surya, how's your studies going, son?

Surya: Father, it's going well.

Father: I know you are not satisfied with me, son.

Surya: Why are you saying that, Dad? You have taken good care of us.

Father: But I couldn't fulfill any of your desires properly.

Surya has two younger sisters. One has passed SSC and the other is studying in class eleven. The family has many dreams surrounding both the sisters. One day, suddenly, she sees her younger sister Maya riding a rickshaw with a boy very closely, which bothers her a lot. Because she never expected such behavior from her. Coming home, she sits silently without saying anything to anyone because if Dad and Mom find out, they will be very upset. So, when Dad and Mom fall asleep, she takes Maya to her room.

Maya: What do you want to say, big brother?

Surya: Who is that boy?

Maya: Which boy?

Surya: Listen, don't misbehave. You know I don't like misbehavior at all.

Maya: Look, big brother, honestly, I don't understand what you're saying. I'm going, I have to study."

Love

About the Creator

Enjoyed the story?
Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (1)

  • ROCK 3 months ago

    Surya seems to live his life with high excited from others and perhaps much judgement. Perhaps Surya needs to develop his own character first.

NWritten by Nikolas

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.