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Magpies

A Story Every Day in 2024 Feb 16th 47/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 3 years ago • 2 min read
Magpies
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"Go on! Get away from there!"

Trisha banged on the kitchen window again and watched with satisfaction as the magpies skittered off, a flash of black and white, retreating over the fence. They'd be back, she knew.

She'd started putting feeders out for the little birds: the bundles of fluff that jetted in and jetted out; the balls of colour that clutched at the nut feeder and attacked it like a jack hammer; the brown wren that darted and hopped with such whimsical movements that it made her heart swell.

They brought her joy and she was keen to preserve that.

The magpies had become her nemesis on the day that she had seen one pecking the floor and later, where it had been, found the remnants of a small blue egg, albumen scoured. She recognised it as a robin's. It filled her with inordinate sadness.

She viewed magpies as feathered raptors, keen predators looking for opportunity. Now, whenever she saw them dart in, she would bang on the window and revel in their shock and rapid escape.

"I think I'll hang some washing out," she thought, seeing the trees moving as the wind cajoled them and went to the machine to load the basket and take it outside to her rotary washing line. The wind was picking up, the trees now swaying, like a swimmer in distress on the sea.

It was gusty and she knew the washing would dry quickly. She might even be able to get the bedding done. She went over to the line and bent to find her peg bag and a t-shirt to hang when, as she was coming back upright, the rotary swung hard as a freakish gust of wind powered in, and it hit her square on the temple. She fell heavily to the floor, unconscious.

***

Trisha came to, to searing pain. Her head, throbbing. Sticky. She was in agony. She felt incredibly nauseous.

Her thoughts were scrambling. Such pain! Her head. Behind her eyes. She remembered the line, the gust, then nothing.

She tried to open her eyes. She realised she couldn't.

Her screams alerted the neighbours as the magpies sat twittering in the trees.

***

366 words

I have magpies in my garden. I am always wary of them and quite rightly if this story is anything to go by.

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    Written by Rachel Deeming