“Oh man, it feels like I’m floating… and these colors look crazy!”
“You are floating,” Gretchen sighed, glancing up from where she’d been crocheting on the couch. “And it looks like your eyes have turned into mantis shrimp eyes, so you’ve probably got several new photoreceptors.”
“Ah, jeez.”
“Did you buy your mushrooms from Dankerbell? You know she only deals in real magic, not hallucinogens. This is like the fourth time!”
“Not helpful.”
“Hang tight, I’ll contact the centaur for disease control… again.”
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Tiffany Mercer
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Comments (34)
Nice 👍
I wrote something similar to this called "Psilocybin Dream."
Very unique.
LOVE the last line, I busted out laughing. Perfect word play.
Lol, this was awesomeeee! I've subscribed!
This feels so effortless, so real. Great writing!
Genius
GREAT WORK I WANT TO SEE MORE!!!!
Haha, this is brilliant. So imaginative. Congrats on TS. You have a new subscriber!
Nice
Excellent take on the challenge and a very deserving Top Story. Congrats.
Nice one
Good article image
Interesting twist with Real Magic great job keeps you wondering
Love this! Congrats on your top story!
Lol! Love this one! Congrats on a well deserved TS!
Good one!
I enjoyed the way you had specific effects due to the magic mushrooms, like the shrimp eyes.
Oh, I love the way you played with words on this one! Congratulations on a well-deserved Top Story!
Lol. This one is great. Congrats on the TS
Super funny, loved it!
Very creative.
That was a fun story to read and very amusing. Great job, and congrats on the top story.
love it
nice keep going....!