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INTRO

I have created a paradoxical short story which I think that it will be exciting. It's about a boy .The boy which is the main character faces many mysterious loops about his past. And in the end he discovers about his parents that their death was not a coincidence. He was told wrong because of some agonic truths which he could n't afford to stand

Part 1:

The story begins as the boy is sleeping reliving one of his past memories. He saw a man outside his home standing and staring at him in a distorted way. The kid named as John Witman ran towards him as he started walking. All of sudden, he disappeared. The boy wakes up and gets ready to head for his collage .

About his previous home :

From the start , he lives in the farm with is Aunt. Because after their parents death , she decided to take care of him . When he grew up his aunt sent him to some city so he could get better education.

So, the boy wakes up from his dream and gets ready to head for collage . He took shower , and ate his break fast and leave his apartment. After few days have been passed , he is coming home from his collage and all of sudden , he sees the same man as he saw in his past when he was 5 years ago .

Shocking mystery:

According to John , he remembers his few memories when he was 5. But after that 5 years were kind of a blur to him. He can't remember a thing .These 5 years are anonymous to him

The story INTRO

I have created a paradoxical short story which I think that it will be exciting. It's about a boy .The boy which is the main character faces many mysterious loops about his past. And in the end he discovers about his parents that their death was not a coincidence. He was told wrong because of some agonic truths which he could n't afford to stand

Part 1:

The story begins as the boy is sleeping reliving one of his past memories. He saw a man outside his home standing and staring at him in a distorted way. The kid named as John Witman ran towards him as he started walking. All of sudden, he disappeared. The boy wakes up and gets ready to head for his collage .

About his previous home

From the start , he lives in the farm with is Aunt. Because after their parents death , she decided to take care of him . When he grew up his aunt sent him to some city so he could get better education.

So, the boy wakes up from his dream and gets ready to head for collage . He took shower , and ate his break fast and leave his apartment. After few days have been passed , he is coming home from his collage and all of sudden , he sees the same man as he saw in his past when he was 5 years ago .

Shocking mystery:

According to John , he remembers his few memories when he was 5. But after that 5 years were kind of a blur to him. He can't remember a thing .These 5 years are anonymous to him

The story continues::

So , when he is getting out of his collage , he sees the same man as he saw in his old memory . Out of intimate mindfulness, he desperately runs before him . But accidentally, he gets hit by a car very badly and refer to the city hospital. His Aunt comes to see him. He doesn't told her about this because he thought that it will make her think that John is getting crazy . John Witman was also not sure about this. This thought crosses his mind that may be it is a mind illusion.

His parents Death::

His Aunt realizes that it is the good time to tell him about his parents real cause of death .

About his father:

A years ago , his Aunt told him that one day his mother, father , her, and him when he was 1 years old were at beach enjoying holiday . Basically they lived in a man farm and the beach was not too far from it. And there was jungle or forest a few kilometres. He was told that his father jumped into beach's water and a strong ripple of water took him because he went too and his body was found by no body. It's the lie that his aunt tell him before. But it's the time to tell to the truth

She now tells him the truth about his father . The conditions are the same but she don't know that his father is dead. She tells him that " On that day , he never went into the sea water . There was a forest nearby that beach. He went there for hunting and never came back . We sent police out there but not a trace of his being was found. So, she didn't know exactly that his father was alive or dead.

About his mother.:

He was told that his mother was died because of a heart attack. But it isn't the truth. It was Friday . Her Aunt basically lives with them because her husband had died long ago . So , she lives with her brother. One day , his mother didn't wake up . The post martam report said that she was killed by someone through suffocating his breath: meaning that someone killed her by placing an pilow on her face

John Witman surprises after learning the truth. He decides that he will come back to his old home when his collage vacations will come. So, when his collage is over , he comes back to his farm . So, that he can learn the truth. He spends a month with his aunt but finds nothing . So , month has passed and he has to continue his studies. He goes back to the city to continue his studies because his final exams are near. For now , he decides to forget about it.

His return to the city:

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So , when he is getting out of his collage , he sees the same man as he saw in his old memory . Out of intimate mindfulness, he desperately runs before him . But accidentally, he gets hit by a car very badly and refer to the city hospital. His Aunt comes to see him. He doesn't told her about this because he thought that it will make her think that John is getting crazy . John Witman was also not sure about this. This thought crosses his mind that may be it is a mind illusion.

His parents Death::

His Aunt realizes that it is the good time to tell him about his parents real cause of death .

About his father:



A years ago , his Aunt told him that one day his mother, father , her, and him when he was 1 years old were at beach enjoying holiday . Basically they lived in a man farm and the beach was not too far from it. And there was jungle or forest a few kilometres. He was told that his father jumped into beach's water and a strong ripple of water took him because he went too and his body was found by no body. It's the lie that his aunt tell him before. But it's the time to tell to the truth

She now tells him the truth about his father . The conditions are the same but she don't know that his father is dead. She tells him that " On that day , he never went into the sea water . There was a forest nearby that beach. He went there for hunting and never came back . We sent police out there but not a trace of his being was found. So, she didn't know exactly that his father was alive or dead.

About his mother.:

He was told that his mother was died because of a heart attack. But it isn't the truth. It was Friday . Her Aunt basically lives with them because her husband had died long ago . So , she lives with her brother. One day , his mother didn't wake up . The medical report said that she was killed by someone through suffocating his breath: meaning that someone killed her by placing an pillow on her face



John Witman surprises after learning the truth. He decides that he will come back to his old home when his collage vacations will come. So, when his collage is over , he comes back to his farm . So, that he can learn the truth. He spends a month with his aunt but finds nothing . So , month has passed and he has to continue his studies. He goes back to the city to continue his studies because his final exams are near. For now , he decides to forget about it.



His return to the city:

When he comes back in his apartment ,he sees a book which is placed on his study table with some notes . The book's name is " Paradox" And one of the notes says that " The Forest"

Part 2 will be coming soon .Please leave comments , so that I would be confident about it's 2 part . Thanks for reading.