
Jezebel and Delilah stepped into Eden the way a wrong note slips into a familiar song...softly, but with a dissonance that made every leaf pause.
They knew that they were Outsiders. They felt the subtle nuances of the strange garden.
They both did not arrive together. They just appeared, the way dreams do: Jezebel first, barefoot on dew‑slick grass, her hair catching the early light like an ominous warning. Delilah followed moments later, brushing dust from her palms as if she had just climbed out of a long, dark tunnel.
Neither woman recognized the place.
But...Both felt immediately unwelcome.
The air was too clean, too bright, too intentional. Every color seemed sharpened to a point. The trees breathed in unison. The river gurgled a melody that felt like ancient memory, but not theirs.
And the serpent - coiled on a low branch, watching - knew them before they knew themselves.
Delilah the betrayer, is curiosity made flesh. She wants to understand, to belong, to translate the Garden’s perfection into human meaning. But her reverence becomes her undoing; she misreads the place as metaphor when it is literal, and Eden punishes misunderstanding.
Jezebel the idolatrous queen, embodies defiance and perception. She moves through Eden like someone who has already learned too much from the world outside. Her presence disturbs the harmony; she reads the Garden as a system to be decoded, not worshipped. The serpent recognizes her because she carries the scent of rebellion - the echo of every question that paradise forbids.
The Garden Responds protectively...curiously...
Eden was not a place one simply entered. It was a closed loop, a self‑contained logic. Everything here had a role, a purpose, a lineage. Jezebel and Delilah were none of these things. They were variables introduced into a system that did not tolerate uncertainty.
The moment they arrived, the Garden shifted into contretemps
The lilies turned their faces away.
The fig leaves rustled with suspicion.
The air thickened, as if trying to push them back out.
Jezebel felt it first- a pressure behind her ears, like the place itself was trying to read her. Delilah felt it too, but she mistook it for awe. She whispered, “It’s beautiful,” and the trees shivered as though she had spoken out of turn.
....
The serpent slid down the trunk with the ease of something that had never known fear.
“You again,” it hissed, though neither woman remembered ever being here.
Jezebel stepped back. “We’ve never met.”
The serpent laughed - a sound like leaves burning.
“You arrive without knowing. You always do.”
Delilah frowned. “What is this place?”
“A question,” the serpent said. “One you cannot answer.”
It circled them slowly, tasting the air around their ankles, their wrists, their throats.
“You do not belong. And yet… you are here.”
In this strange Misinterpretation...
Jezebel tried to make sense of the Garden the way she made sense of cities - by mapping exits, reading faces, listening for danger. But Eden had no corners, no shadows, no lies. It was too open, too honest. She felt exposed.
....
Delilah, on the other hand, tried to treat Eden like a story she had heard once as a child. She reached for symbols, for meaning, for old prophecy. But Eden was not metaphor. It was literal, painfully so. When she touched a flower, it recoiled. When she whispered a prayer, the wind swallowed it whole.
Their instincts - so useful everywhere else - failed them here.
...But - The Garden alone can Decide.
The serpent lifted its head.
“You must choose,” it said. “Stay and be changed, or leave and be forgotten.”
“Forgotten by who?” Jezebel asked.
“By yourselves,” the serpent replied. “Eden does not allow loose ends.”
Delilah’s breath caught. “We didn’t ask to come here.”
“No one ever does.”
The Garden waited - silent, expectant, ancient.
Jezebel felt the weight of the place pressing against her skin, rewriting her edges. Delilah felt the opposite: as if the Garden were erasing her, petal by petal.
They looked at each other, two outsiders standing in a paradise that recognized them more deeply than they recognized themselves.
...
Jezebel stepped forward. “We leave.”
Delilah hesitated, but followed. The serpent did not stop them. It only watched, its eyes bright with something like pity.
As they walked, the Garden folded behind them - paths closing, colors dimming, memories dissolving. By the time they reached the edge, Jezebel could no longer recall the serpent’s face. Delilah could no longer remember the shape of the trees.
When they finally stepped out, the world they returned to felt slightly wrong, as if a page had been torn from a book they didn’t know they were reading.
They looked at each other, confused.
“Where were we?” Delilah asked.
Jezebel opened her mouth, but no answer came.
Behind them, far beyond sight, the serpent curled back into its branch and whispered to the leaves:
“They will return. Outsiders always do.”
The temptation is so very delicious.

About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.
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