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In the Stillness of the Night

For Ray's Oh Jeff Unofficial Challenge

By John CoxPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Oh, Jeff...I Love You, Too...But... 1964 (detail) by Roy Lichtenstein, held in private collection

Ray's Oh Jeff Flash Fiction Contest

"Oh, Jeff...I love you, too...but..."

He pulls the phone from his ear slowly and sighs.

She continues to speak, her voice tinny, unreal. But he has stopped listening.

He remembers better days when they rarely argued, her eyes so wet with love that he was sometimes embarrassed to return her gaze.

Slowly raising the phone again, he hears her ask him, "Don't you have anything to say?"

"Please don't go," he whispers.

"We've been over this before, Jeff. I need more than please."

"Please," he replies hoarsely.

"Goodbye, Jeff."

Slowly he lowers the phone to the desk and opens the drawer and gazes for a long time at the pistol resting there.

A single shot rings out in the stillness of the night.

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123 Words

Be safe during the holidays. If needed, reach out to the national suicide hot line by dialing or texting 9-8-8

Psychological

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John Cox

Where would you like to travel? Who would you like to meet? No ticket required, a surprise at every destination guaranteed. Strap on your time travel goggles and bring a compass. It's sometimes bumpy in my imagination, so hold on tight!

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