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Frozen

Winter is a particularly fun season - A Drabble

By Susan Fourtané Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
A frozen, pale, stiff human hand emerged from its snowy grave — Concept created by Susan Fourtané using Ideogram.ai

As I walked through the snowy woods, a playful magpie rested on the treetops under the dancing snowflakes.

The wild rabbits began to dig deep under a pine tree. Slowly, a frozen, pale, stiff human hand emerged from its snowy grave.

As the furry creatures dug deeper, a lifeless human body was revealed.

Snowflakes had been dancing a quiet winter ballet, unaware of the mortal dangers, unaware of the hidden death that lay underneath them.

They were the only witnesses of the crime.

They became accomplices of the most haunting murder the town ever knew.

How could the snowflakes know?

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©️Susan Fourtané, 2025 - All rights reserved

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Susan Fourtané

Susan Fourtané is a Science and Technology Journalist, a professional writer with over 18 years experience writing for global media and industry publications. She's a member of the ABSW, WFSJ, Society of Authors, and London Press Club.

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    Written by Susan Fourtané