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Fed is Best

All Mothers Sacrifice

By Kelly RobertsonPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Fed is Best
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Jenna stared down at the baby suckling at her breast. A weary smile curved her pale lips, a mixture of pride and love and exhaustion all jumbled together as she felt the gentle tug of her child nursing hungrily.

But as she watched him, darker emotions cracked through the haze fogging her brain. Confusion. Terror. Memory broke through, but too late. She'd never had a baby, never even been pregnant.

Weak, Jenna melted back into the rocking chair. She cringed as the child's teeth sank deeper into her skin, draining more than mother's milk.

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Kelly Robertson

Wrangler of chaos. Creator of more. Writing whatever my heart desires, from fantasy to poetry and more!

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  • The Invisible Writer11 months ago

    This started out so sweet then turned scary who's baby is that??? And that last line...is it a vampire baby??? Great Job Kelly

  • Dr Azhar Abbas11 months ago

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  • Loryne Andawey11 months ago

    Oh man! That was dark! You have me beat on the horror short, that's for sure. Well done!

  • Dr Azhar Abbas11 months ago

    wow. That was fantastic

  • Hahahahahaha this made me chuckle. I loved it!

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Oh wow. That was fantastic.

  • Roy Stevens11 months ago

    Yikes, brilliant horror twist that makes the skin crawl. Nicely done Kelly!

  • Caroline Craven11 months ago

    Wow. This is awesome! Great writing.

  • Donna Renee11 months ago

    Eeeeeeeek!!! 🫣😱👏👏. This was excellent!!

  • Leslie Writes11 months ago

    That’s diabolical! Fantastic entry!

  • L.C. Schäfer11 months ago

    Ding ding ding! I think we have a winner 😎

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