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Father Knows Best?

Look at me now.

By JBazPublished 5 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Father Knows Best?
Photo by Zachary Shakked on Unsplash

'Do something with your life.' He yelled, and then reminded me. 'I came from nothing and worked to become a multi millionaire.'

I shrugged.

'Your sister sponsors two foundations, you should too.'

I had a business. It was selling drugs to all my rich friends, I was making a shit ton of money. I just couldn't tell him.

I met my 'partners' that night at the new hospital being built. We argued about some missing cash.

I began chuckling, as the cement poured over me. My father got his wish, I was now part of a foundation.


About the Creator


I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.

I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.

Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.

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  • Andre The First5 months ago

    Wow! What a plot twist!! This was amazing.

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    ohh. That was great. Wasn't expecting that ending.

  • This was the best. Love anything with concrete shoes. Great story Jbaz

  • River Joy5 months ago

    Damn that was awesome. I feel like I shouldn't have laughed but I definitely did 😂. Really well done

  • L.C. Schäfer5 months ago

    Shock ending made me laugh 😂

  • Mark Gagnon5 months ago

    I guess every business comes with some risks.😉

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Humorous twisted ending 🤣

  • Loryne Andawey5 months ago

    And you said I'm dark and twisted 🤣. Well done with this one 👏👏👏

  • OMG...This is the best!! LOL

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