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Faedaze

Faedaze: the daydream-like state of one whom the fae has touched

By Kelsey ClareyPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Faedaze
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Daisy leaned back against the wall of the window bench, the dress she was embroidering on falling to her lap, all but forgotten. Her gaze rested on the trees just beyond the edge of her garden, watching with dreamlike expression on her face, waiting for something others doubted would ever come.

She'd been like this since the night of the Full Moon, unfocused and constantly lost in a dream world. She'd left her friend's house at dusk seeming perfectly normal and then not returned to her own doorstep until dawn, lost in this starry-eyed daze.

No one would believe her if she told them what had happened. How she had met a stranger on the road - the most beautiful person she had ever seen - and how they had charmed her into joining them for a moonlit dance among the trees. How she had lost all sense of time until the sun had begun to rise, and how even then she had not wished to return home. How in just one long, magical night her heart had been completely stolen by someone no mortal village boy could ever hope to compare to.

So, she said nothing. She simply sat and watched the woods, waiting for the next time her otherworldly paramour would come to take her away. And hoping they wouldn't send her back again.

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A/N: I initially wrote this for a Vocal challenge last year and then let it sit in my drafts for months. Now seems like as good a time as any to publish it!

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About the Creator

Kelsey Clarey

She/Her/Fae/Faer. I live in Nova Scotia, Canada. I mostly write poetry and flash fiction currently, a lot of it fantasy/folklore/fairy tale inspired. I also like to do a lot of fiber arts and design TTRPGs.

https://linktr.ee/islanderscaper

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  • Anna 29 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • AliMartabout a month ago

    Like it

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    Lovely Top Story! Congratulations. Love it!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    so well done! Congrats on your top story

  • Abdul Qayyumabout a month ago

    Your writing is incredibly engaging and vivid! I felt like I was right there in the scene alongside the characters." https://vocal.media/fiction/the-time-traveling-plumber

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    Ohh very pretty I enjoyed this 💘

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  • Adnan Yousafabout a month ago

    Nice story 😍😍

  • D. D. Leeabout a month ago

    Nice story. Congrats on TS.

  • That was a lovely story and the fact that it got noticed by Vocal shows that you were right to release it. Great work.

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Congratulations on TS! 🫶🏻🎉

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Lovely - fae-dazed!

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  • angela hepworthabout a month ago

    This is gorgeous and ethereal, loved it! Would love to hear more :)

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Why do I want to be in a faedaze? It doesn't sound very functional!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    I am glad you finally removed this story from you draft. This was a nice delightful magical story .

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    "Captured" by your words in this one

  • John Coxabout a month ago

    There is something truly terrifying about discovering the extraordinary in the midst of an ordinary life. This is very good. I think it merits a longer and more developed storyline,

  • Morris Waytsabout a month ago

    The longing! I like it. 💖

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