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Echoes of forbidden love

by Clara O. Louis

By Clara Ophelea LouisPublished 12 months ago 3 min read
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Echoes of forbidden love
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Echoes of Forbidden love

By Clararose Louis

Amelia has always been intrigued by the enigmatic and unusual. She heard innumerable tales of suffering and loss during her time as a nurse at St. Mary's Hospital, but none captured her attention as much as the legend of the ghost who is rumored to haunt the hospital's abandoned wing.

A young man named Gabriel was said to have perished tragically in a car accident and been stuck in the physical world, where he spent his entire life walking the hallways of St. Mary's. One beautiful night, Amelia followed her curiosity and entered the hospital's restricted area.

She first recognized him there, in the unsettling glow of flickering lights. Gabriel suddenly materialized in front of her, his translucent form bearing the sorrow of a thousand crushed hearts in his eyes. A bond formed between them at the instant their eyes locked, defying the limits of life and death.

As Amelia and Gabriel's ethereal love grew, days turned into nights. Their rendezvous was a delicate dance between two cultures and would take place in secret. Although pure, their love was doomed from the beginning.

The medical staff, however, started to observe Amelia's alteration. Her once vivacious personality began to diminish, and a shroud-like gloom clung to her. In the hospital hallways, rumors about her nighttime trips and her relationship with the ghost circulated.

The stern Sister Agnes, a person who respected life and understood the perils of meddling in matters beyond our comprehension, received word. One evening, Sister Agnes confronted Amelia and pleaded with her to repent in order to preserve her soul.

"Amelia, you have strayed into dangerous territory," Sister Agnes warned, her eyes stern and unyielding. "You have become entangled with a ghost, and in doing so, you have opened the door to your own damnation."

Amelia shook, torn between her love for Gabriel and her concern for everlasting repercussions. Her heart yearned for the connection she had made in the spiritual world, despite knowing Sister Agnes' warnings.

Amelia's health grew worse as the days went by, her body ravaged by the burden of an unrequited love. With each subsequent encounter, Gabriel's ethereal presence grew weaker and weaker.

Amelia finally gave in to her desperation and asked the advice of an old wise woman who was believed to know about the otherworldly. The wise woman's eyes were filled with grief as she listened closely to Amelia's story.

"Love, my child, can be both a beautiful gift and a treacherous curse," the wise woman said softly. "True love is not worth sacrificing your own soul. It is better to let go than to be consumed by the darkness that lurks beyond our world."

Amelia understood the wisdom of the old woman's advice while her heart ached with sorrow. She said goodbye to Gabriel with tremendous sadness, freeing him from their fleeting connection. Gabriel's spectral form eventually vanished, leaving Amelia distraught and alone.

Following that, Amelia came out of her depression with renewed comprehension. She came to understand that although love had the power to transcend both life and death, it should never be at the expense of one's own redemption.

Amelia made a commitment to helping others from that day on, motivated by the difficult lessons she had learned. She found refuge in reassuring the sick, giving them encouragement and compassion through their most difficult times.

Her terrible story reverberated throughout St. Mary's Hospital, warning all who came after her of the risks of forbidden love and the perils of tempting fate. Amelia's story continued to be told, serving not only as a warning but also as evidence of the strength of redemption and the tenacity of the human spirit.

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Clara Ophelea Louis

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  • Munir Lalani12 months ago

    Very interesting an unusual love story with a very powerful message at the end !

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