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Don't Tell

Drawn to an abandoned house at the edge of town, a woman discovers that the whispers echoing through its mold-covered halls may belong to the forgotten child she left behind within herself.

By Mr HowPublished 3 months ago 5 min read

The house stood at the end of Ashwood Lane, hidden behind a curtain of dead trees and tangled vines. Most people in town avoided looking at it. Children crossed the street when they passed. Adults pretended it wasn't there.

They said it had been abandoned for decades.

No one knew exactly when the last family left.

No one wanted to know.

Yet every evening, on my walk home from work, I found myself staring at it.

There was something unsettling about the place. The windows reflected no light. The roof sagged under years of neglect. Black stains crawled across the siding like spreading disease.

And somehow, despite its decay, it never seemed empty.

It felt watchful.

Alive.

One October evening, a storm rolled across the horizon. Gray clouds swallowed the sunset, and the air smelled of rain-soaked earth. As I passed the old property, I noticed something unusual.

The front door was open.

Not wide.

Just a few inches.

A narrow black gap leading into darkness.

My stomach tightened.

Curiosity urged me forward while common sense screamed at me to leave.

Curiosity won.

The gate groaned as I pushed it open. Weeds brushed against my legs as I crossed the yard. The closer I got, the colder the air became.

By the time I reached the porch, my skin was covered in goosebumps.

I stepped inside.

The smell hit me first.

Mold.

Rotting wood.

Damp plaster.

The odor hung thick in the air, as though the house had been sealed shut for years and had only now exhaled.

Dust covered every surface.

Faded wallpaper peeled from the walls in long curling strips. Water stains spread across the ceiling. Floorboards creaked beneath each careful step.

The silence felt unnatural.

Heavy.

Oppressive.

I wandered through what had once been a living room. An overturned chair sat in the corner. A cracked picture frame rested on the floor. Everything looked frozen in time.

Then I heard it.

A whisper.

Soft and distant.

"Don't tell."

I stopped.

The words were so faint I wondered if I'd imagined them.

The house settled with a groan.

Nothing.

I exhaled nervously and continued forward.

Then the whisper came again.

Closer.

"Don't tell."

The voice sounded young.

A child.

A strange chill spread through my chest.

The words stirred something buried deep inside me, though I couldn't understand why.

I followed the sound down a narrow hallway.

The wallpaper here had almost completely peeled away, exposing mold-covered plaster beneath. Dark patches spread across the walls like bruises.

The deeper I went, the stronger the smell became.

The hallway ended at a closed door.

My pulse quickened.

The whisper seemed to come from beyond it.

I reached for the knob.

The metal felt ice-cold.

Slowly, I turned it.

The door opened into a small room.

At first glance, it appeared empty.

Then I noticed the mirror.

It stood against the far wall, nearly as tall as the ceiling.

Its silver frame was tarnished with age.

Dust coated the glass.

Yet somehow, the mirror looked untouched by the decay surrounding it.

I stepped closer.

My reflection stared back.

Pale face.

Uneasy eyes.

A nervous expression I barely recognized.

Then something moved.

Not behind me.

Inside the reflection.

A little girl appeared beside my image.

I spun around.

The room was empty.

When I looked back at the mirror, she remained there.

She couldn't have been older than eight.

Her dark hair hung in tangled strands around her face. Her dress looked old-fashioned and stained with dust.

Most disturbing were her eyes.

They weren't angry.

They weren't sad.

They were frightened.

As though she had been trapped somewhere for a very long time.

I took a step backward.

She took one forward.

My breath caught.

The movement wasn't synchronized.

The reflection was acting on its own.

The girl's lips parted.

"Don't tell."

This time the words were clear.

My chest tightened.

A sudden headache exploded behind my eyes.

Images flashed through my mind.

A dark room.

A locked door.

Small trembling hands.

Someone crying.

The memories vanished before I could grasp them.

The girl pressed her hand against the glass.

Something about her seemed familiar.

Painfully familiar.

As though I had known her once.

The mold on the walls began spreading.

At first I thought it was a trick of the light.

Then I watched it move.

Black veins crawled across the plaster.

Across the floor.

Across the ceiling.

Growing.

Breathing.

The room darkened.

My heartbeat thundered in my ears.

The girl leaned closer.

"You left me here."

The words struck like a hammer.

Another wave of memories surged forward.

Not complete memories.

Fragments.

Fear.

Silence.

Secrets.

A child learning to hide pain because speaking felt impossible.

A child convincing herself that forgetting was safer than remembering.

The realization hit me with terrifying force.

The girl wasn't a ghost.

She wasn't haunting the house.

She was a part of me.

A forgotten version of myself.

The piece I had buried years ago.

The frightened child who never got the chance to speak.

The mirror cracked.

A sharp fracture split the glass from top to bottom.

Then another.

And another.

The girl's expression softened.

For the first time, she smiled.

Not happily.

But with relief.

As though she had finally been seen.

The mold stopped moving.

The room became still.

The girl slowly faded from view.

Then she was gone.

Only my reflection remained.

I stared at the shattered mirror.

Tears filled my eyes without warning.

For years, I had ignored the pieces of myself that hurt.

The memories I didn't want.

The fears I couldn't explain.

The house had not trapped those things.

I had.

The storm outside erupted with a crash of thunder.

I turned and ran.

The hallway seemed longer now.

The shadows deeper.

The air colder.

I burst through the front door and stumbled onto the porch.

Rain poured from the sky.

The abandoned house stood silently behind me.

No whispers.

No movement.

No glowing windows.

Just an empty structure decaying beneath the storm.

Yet even now, months later, I still think about that night.

Sometimes I wake suddenly from sleep.

Sometimes I catch the faint smell of mildew in places where it shouldn't exist.

And sometimes, in the silence between dreams and waking, I hear a distant voice.

Not threatening.

Not angry.

Only gentle.

A reminder from the child I finally remembered.

A whisper carried from somewhere deep within.

"Don't tell."

And for the first time in my life, I know that I must.

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