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Delighted You're Here

A stranded traveler discovers a perfect town where every smile hides a secret—and every welcome comes with a price.

By Mr HowPublished 3 months ago 5 min read

The town of Black Hollow appeared suddenly, as if it had been waiting beside the road for Maya Carter to arrive.

She had been driving through endless miles of forest when her car began making a horrible grinding sound. The engine died less than a mile later, leaving her stranded beneath gray skies and a light drizzle.

The nearest tow truck driver was an elderly man who seemed oddly pleased by her situation.

"You're lucky," he said while loading her car. "Black Hollow's just up the road."

He smiled.

"Wonderful people there."

An hour later, Maya stood in the center of a small town that looked like it belonged in a postcard.

White houses lined clean streets. Flowers bloomed in every yard. The town square featured a stone fountain surrounded by benches.

Everything seemed perfect.

Almost too perfect.

As she walked toward the only inn, a woman sweeping her porch waved enthusiastically.

"Delighted you're here!"

Maya smiled politely.

A few minutes later, a man exiting the grocery store said the exact same thing.

Then the hotel clerk.

Then a teenager riding a bicycle.

Then an elderly couple sitting beside the fountain.

Every greeting was identical.

Every smile looked exactly the same.

By evening, she had heard the phrase more than twenty times.

Delighted you're here.

The words echoed in her mind as she settled into a room at the inn.

The next morning, she learned that repairs on her vehicle would take at least a week.

Reluctantly, she decided to stay.

At first, Black Hollow felt peaceful.

People left homemade pies on doorsteps.

Neighbors greeted one another warmly.

Children played quietly in the streets.

Yet something about the town felt wrong.

There were no arguments.

No disagreements.

No signs of ordinary human frustration.

Everyone seemed permanently cheerful.

One afternoon Maya visited the local diner.

The waitress served her coffee and smiled.

"How are you enjoying Black Hollow?"

"It's nice," Maya admitted.

The waitress nodded.

"You belong here."

The statement felt strangely personal.

Maya laughed nervously.

"I've only been here three days."

The waitress's smile widened.

"Sometimes that's all it takes."

That night Maya awoke around two in the morning.

A strange sensation had pulled her from sleep.

The room felt colder than usual.

She walked to the window and froze.

Every house on the street had its porch light turned on.

And every resident was standing outside.

Motionless.

Silent.

Facing the distant forest beyond town.

Dozens of people stood perfectly still beneath the moonlight.

Watching.

Waiting.

Maya rubbed her eyes.

When she looked again, they remained exactly where they had been.

A chill crawled down her spine.

The following morning she asked the innkeeper about it.

The woman paused for a fraction of a second.

Then she smiled.

"Probably just a dream."

Maya knew it wasn't.

Over the next several days, the unsettling feeling grew stronger.

People seemed to know things they shouldn't.

A cashier asked about Maya's childhood dog.

A stranger mentioned the city where she had attended college.

Another resident knew the name of her late father.

She had never shared any of that information.

Whenever she questioned them, they simply smiled.

"Black Hollow takes care of its people."

The answer explained nothing.

Determined to learn more, Maya visited the town library.

The building was small and nearly empty.

She searched through local history records.

What she found made no sense.

The town appeared to have no history before twenty years ago.

There were photographs.

News articles.

Tax records.

Everything older than two decades was missing.

It was as though Black Hollow had suddenly appeared from nowhere.

As she examined an old newspaper clipping, the librarian approached quietly.

"You shouldn't worry about the past."

Maya looked up.

"Why not?"

The librarian's smile never faltered.

"Because the future is much more important."

The words lingered in her thoughts long after she left.

Three nights later the annual Founder's Gathering arrived.

According to the townspeople, it was Black Hollow's most cherished tradition.

The entire community assembled near the forest's edge after sunset.

Hundreds of lanterns illuminated the darkness.

Families stood together beneath towering trees.

Everyone wore white.

Everyone smiled.

Maya felt like the only person who didn't understand what was happening.

The mayor stepped onto a wooden platform.

He raised his hands.

The crowd instantly fell silent.

"Tonight," he announced, "we celebrate another year of belonging."

The townspeople cheered.

Then they turned toward Maya.

Every face.

Every pair of eyes.

Focused entirely on her.

A knot formed in her stomach.

The mayor extended his hand.

"Come forward."

"I think I'd rather leave," Maya said.

The crowd laughed softly.

Not mockingly.

Patiently.

As though she had misunderstood something obvious.

"You already arrived," the mayor replied.

"There is no leaving."

The ground suddenly trembled.

At first Maya thought it was an earthquake.

Then she noticed the trees moving.

Not swaying.

Breathing.

The entire forest expanded and contracted like the lungs of a sleeping giant.

Gasps spread through the crowd.

Not from fear.

From reverence.

A tear appeared in the darkness between the trees.

The opening widened slowly.

Stars shimmered within it.

Thousands of stars.

Then Maya realized they weren't stars at all.

They were eyes.

Countless glowing eyes staring from an impossible distance.

A vast shape moved behind them.

Something larger than mountains.

Older than oceans.

Ancient beyond imagination.

The townspeople dropped to their knees.

Smiling.

Worshipping.

A voice echoed from the opening.

It wasn't heard with ears.

It arrived directly inside Maya's mind.

The sound carried the weight of centuries.

The vast entity seemed to examine her.

To recognize her.

To welcome her.

Then it spoke.

"We are delighted you're here."

The crowd repeated the words in perfect unison.

Their voices blended with the creature's impossible whisper.

Maya stumbled backward.

The mayor smiled sadly.

"You understand now."

"What are you?" she whispered.

"We were travelers once," he said.

"Just like you."

The eyes within the darkness blinked.

The opening widened further.

One by one, the townspeople began to fade.

Their bodies dissolved into streams of light flowing toward the entity.

Their smiles never disappeared.

Relief replaced them.

Freedom.

The mayor was the last to remain.

"For twenty years we've waited for someone new."

Maya's heart stopped.

"What does that mean?"

His smile softened.

"It means our turn is over."

Then he vanished.

The town lights went dark.

The forest became silent.

And Maya stood alone before the cosmic doorway as the ancient presence welcomed its newest resident.

Far above, thousands of eyes opened wider.

Watching.

Waiting.

Delighted that she had finally arrived.

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