I smelt him entering the room. I tried to hide, but he was not my blind date, he passed me by. I hardly noticed the clean shaven shy man , that smelled of ivory soap and baby powder that approached me. I relaxed with the familiar odor of clean, and turned to him and said hi.
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Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Comments (4)
The smells can say so much ❤️
Beautiful beginning to a love story! Nicely dine Antoinette!
Oh, I could smell everything in this!! Great work bringing that sense to life :)
Hi 😉❤️