Canned feelings
Based on Don’t Hug Me I’m Scared, Red & Duck, fanfiction tribute micro-fiction. Red’s perspective.
Our house is dark. I can’t see you but I feel you next to me and I tell you with my heart in my throat that I like looking at you. You say the same thing. It’s like the lights are on again and a waterfall is tumbling over us.
“Hold my hand and we’re half wayyy there—-
You whisper in a gravely, stoic voice, and I feel so safe in a house full of hellish nightmares.
“There’s a place for us,” you kiss my face. “Somewhere, someday.”
I smell a rotting, smoking can, full of guts.
Full of us.
About the Creator
Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos.
I am Bexley is published by Resurgence Novels here.
The Half Paper Moon is available on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella Carnivorous is to be published by Eukalypto soon! Coming soon
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Comments (4)
The whole of West Side Story & its aftermath encapsulated in just a few words.
A horror piece with sweet sentiment ❤️
You are on a roll with this horror poem, I can’t keep up
Yes, I enjoyed the video clip 😉🎬📝❤️