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Break Up

A Story Every Day in 2024 Dec 22nd ?/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Break Up
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And so he said "I don't want to be with you anymore" and I said "Why?" and he said "Because I don't think it's working" and I said "Is there someone else?" and he said "No" but he didn't know that I'd seen him with her from his work so I knew he was lying and so I said because I didn't want him to win and feel like he was the one who had all the control "Well, I have. Been seeing someone else" and he said "You fucking what?!"

We can all lie, you know what I mean?

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    Written by Rachel Deeming