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Blightborn Legacy

Prologue

By Stephanie WrightPublished 3 months ago • 5 min read
Blightborn Legacy
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Prologue

The first thing was not just darkness. Darkness is an absence. This was a presence. A suffocating, all-encompassing pressure that was the texture of oblivion itself. Time was not a river here; it was a stagnant, cold lake, and he had no idea how long he had been drowning in it.

Then came the steel.

It was not a memory of a blade or a sword. It was the cold, unyielding fact of metal fused to bone. He felt it in his sternum, a jagged shard of magical ice that had replaced his heart, its cold radiance the only light in the endless dark. It was an anchor, weighing his soul to a place it no longer belonged.

There was no before. There was only the now, and the now was a geometry of agony.

Valerius existed as a point of awareness in a space that had no dimensions. He had no body, yet he was a body. He felt the rack first. It was not a device of wood and iron, but a fundamental law of this new reality. An invisible, inexorable force seized the metaphysical blueprint of his limbs and pulled.

His arms were drawn out to the sides, their sockets screaming as the ligaments, long since turned to brittle cords, stretched beyond their tolerance. The pop was a sensation, a wet, gristly giving-way that echoed through his consciousness as his shoulders dislocated. The force did not stop. It kept pulling, stretching the now-useless arms until the tendons tore from their moorings with the feel of rotting cloth ripped apart. His legs suffered the same fate, the hip joints dislocating with a deep, internal thump of bone grinding against bone.

The rack was just the prelude. The true agony began when the pressure focused on his bones. He felt his femur, the weight-bearer, groaning under the strain. It did not crack; it exploded longitudinally, splitting into two jagged, bloody splinters that were immediately forced past each other. He felt the rough, porous interior of his own bone grating against itself, a sound and a sensation so profound it erased all thought. His spine was a string of firecrackers, one vertebra after another popping free from the next, the discs between them liquefying under the strain.

He was a web of disjointed limbs and shattered bone, a puppet with all its strings cut, floating in the crushing dark and suffocating heat.

It was not the heat of a fire. It was the internal, searing heat of a forge. He felt his skin begin to melt. It was not a quick burning. It was a slow, viscous liquefaction. He felt the epidermis lose its integrity, running like hot wax. The layer beneath, the dermis, followed, thick and rich, dripping from the frame of his broken body in sluggish, heavy droplets. It was a perpetual, silent rain of his own substance, a steady, rhythmic plop, plop, plop that was the only measure of time's passage. He was a melting candle of a man, his wick of consciousness burning brightly in the center of his own dissolving flesh.

Through it all, the presence was there. It was not a voice or a shape, but a cold, heavy weight of "other" that sat inside the ruin of his chest. It was the spider at the center of his web of pain, and it was feeding.

Valerius could feel it. The presence would focus its attention on a specific memory, a specific part of his soul. It found his pride, his ambition, the memory of his first command. It savored the texture of the feeling, the warmth of his triumph, and then it would pull.

The rack would engage again, but this time it was not pulling on his arms. It was pulling on the memory itself, stretching it, distorting it until it was a thin, agonized thread. The memory of his pride became a source of searing pain, the phantom weight of a crown feeling like a red-hot spike being driven into his skull. His love for Sylaria was not a gentle warmth but a white-hot forge in his soul, and the presence would stoke the flames until he was begging for the coldness of the void to return.

He was being unmade, atom by atom, memory by memory. And the ooze of his molten skin never stopped dripping. It pooled beneath him, a warm, viscous lake of his own body, and he could feel its presence, a constant, wet reminder of what he had been and what he was becoming.

Through the haze of pain, he felt a flicker of something else. A distant sensation. The feeling of stone beneath feet. The rough texture of wool against a forearm. The sound of a dry, commanding voice speaking words he did not choose.

He realized, with a fresh wave of horror that dwarfed all the physical agony, that the presence was not just content to torture him. It was using his body in the world above, and it was forcing him to feel it. He was a marionette, and his soul was the one being made to dance on the pins of his own broken bones.

Through it all, the presence watched.

He could feel its amusement. It was not a cruel, human laughter. It was the cold, detached curiosity of a god watching an insect struggle. It would test his senses. It would force his optic nerves to see visions of Sylaria's face, twisted in a rictus of pleasure as she kissed another, and then send a bolt of pure agony through his spine for the sin of still loving her.

He could see her holding a son, their son.

It would make his dead ears hear the sound of his mother's weeping, and then punish him for the weakness of that memory.

The entity was not just torturing him; it was scouring him. It was cleaning the house of his soul, stripping it of everything that made him Valerius until only the raw, screaming essence of a man remained, a perfect, blank vessel to be filled.

He tried to fight. He tried to curl his broken fingers into a fist. He tried to close his eyes. He tried to scream. But he had no eyes, and he had no voice. He was only pain and awareness, a ghost chained to a machine of his own ruined flesh.

And in the moments between the lashes, in the brief, merciful pauses in the symphony of his suffering, he would feel a new sensation. A faint, distant pull. A warmth. It was the feeling of his own body, far away, moving in the world above. He would feel the sun on skin he could no longer touch. He would hear words spoken by a mouth that was no longer his. And he would feel the presence, Yaldabaoth, pilot his corpse like a cruel god, and he would understand the true meaning of his prison.

He was not just being tortured in the dark.

He was being forced to watch, from the inside, as the monster wearing his face went out into the world to finish the work it had started on his soul.

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Stephanie Wright

Survivor. Advocate. Seeker. A woman on a mission to slowly unveil the mysteries of family and the cosmic unknown through the power of storytelling.

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    Written by Stephanie Wright