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Among the Sighs of the Trees

✨A microstory for the soul✨

By Gina C.Published 10 days ago 1 min read
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Silent, still; at completely full draw--I find her tucked in the brambles.

Wild, bushy-tailed; aglow with ineptness--she grazes the lush, green grass.

I focus--using my dominant eye. The weight of the bow on my finger--like wind.

(And that's when I sense you--my eye catches yours.)

"Hello, dear friend," I whisper--though I wonder...are we truly friends?

(Alas, our kismets connect here.)

Here--among the sighs of the trees--where sunlight dances between spaces of secret, untrodden pathways...we're two predatory queens; one prey.


as you drag her into your labyrinth--here--among the sighs of the stomach stays empty, though...

✨my heart becomes full.✨

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About the Creator

Gina C.

Free-Form poet of ethereal style. 🧚‍♀️✨

Creator of stories with hints of fantasy & mystery.


Fueled by a conflicted soul of fire & water. ❤️‍🔥🧜🏻‍♀️

A sucker for a good rhyme. ☺️

Quality over Quantity here. 🙌🏼

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  • Marcin about 18 hours ago

    I'm utterly captivated by this exceptional story!

  • JBaz3 days ago

    Wow, that was beautiful writing. So visual, the scene exploded off the screen and into my mind

  • Well Done!, Please also read this one.

  • Tierney Cashman5 days ago

    I adore this. So much in so few words, the mark of a strong writer. Well done!

  • Rizwan5 days ago

    amzing words

  • ALI HASSAN6 days ago


  • OOOOH I love this! Well done and congratulations on getting a top story!

  • K. C. Wexlar6 days ago

    Congrats on weaving something memorable if you are in the mood for a love story - looking for feedback to maybe turn into a book

  • RM Stockton6 days ago

    Beautifully done!

  • Shaheryar Ahmed6 days ago

    This story express good thoughts about the story. You can also check out mine at

  • Holly Pheni7 days ago

    Wow, Gina! Gorgeous. The words and the images you created here are stunning! Congratulations on the top story!

  • ultimate peace7 days ago


  • Olayinka Helen7 days ago

    The ending is interesting

  • Noir7 days ago

    this story pretty nice. beautiful.

  • אמה משה7 days ago

    Beautiful writing congrats on your top story

  • Andrew Zuk7 days ago

    Congrats on your top story!

  • Nice

  • zain mehmood7 days ago

    congrats on your top story

  • Mario 7 days ago

    Congrats on your top story!

  • Ashley Lima7 days ago

    Congrats on your top story! Beautiful piece :)

  • sleepy drafts7 days ago

    Wow!! This is so stunning! Absolutely deserving of its Top Story place. 💖 Beautiful work, as always, Gina. 💞

  • Harry Trasmonte7 days ago

    Hi guys will you please read my stories too..Thanks..

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