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A Whiff of the Divine

Flash Fiction | Liminal Horror | Dark Comedy

By Jesse L ShelleyPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
A Whiff of the Divine

They found the jar under the overpass, tucked in a shopping cart that smelled like rust and rain. The lid was sealed with wax. No label. Just a faint shimmer inside.

The elder grinned, teeth blackened like tombstones. “This is it. We trick the others, boys. Run the whole goddamn world with this.”

The youngest leaned close, nose twitching. “What’s in it?”

“God.” The elder tapped the glass. “Captured. Condensed.”

He popped the lid, and the smell hit—sweet rot, incense, static electricity. “Just take a whiff.”

One boy inhaled deep. His eyes rolled white. Then he was gone—scrambling up the concrete, running sideways across the wall, laughing like a cracked fairy king. His sneakers left glowing prints. His screams echoed in a language none of them spoke.

Another boy’s voice cracked. “What was really in there?”

The elder held the jar to the light. Inside, nothing but fine powder, dull and glittering like cremation ash.

“Dead god,” he whispered, smiling. “Turned to dust.”

Then he tipped it back, and breathed deep.

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Jesse L Shelley

Forensic Scientist. Knows where they’re buried, and won’t pretend otherwise... I dissect crimes and noir alike shaped by prompt rituals, investigative obsession, and narrative precision. Every story, a darker truth. Come closer.

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    Written by Jesse L Shelley