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A Tale of Missed Opportunties

The Doves and The Tortoise

By Monnade MixoumPublished 2 months ago 4 min read
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In a hidden valley, nestled amongst ancient trees, lived two doves named Pip and Pop. They were inseparable companions, their feathers reflecting the morning sun as they soared effortlessly through the clear blue sky. But lately, a shadow of worry has fallen upon their routine. The once lively stream that gurgled by their nest had dwindled to a mere trickle. Each passing day brought anxiety as the water level dipped lower.

One afternoon, perched upon a branch overlooking the dwindling stream, Pip turned to Pop with a heavy heart. "This can't go on," he cooed softly. "We need to find a new home, a place with a bountiful source of water."

Pop nodded, his bright eyes reflecting Pip's concern. "You're right. We can't stay here and watch our water source disappear."

As they discussed their options, a slow, rumbling voice interrupted them. "Where are you two lovebirds off to in such a hurry?"

It was Beatrice, a wise old tortoise, who lived near the base of the tree where the doves had their nest. Over the years, she had become a dear friend, sharing stories and wisdom with the energetic birds.

Pip explained their predicament, the fear of a dry future hanging heavy in his voice. Beatrice listened patiently, her wrinkled face etched with concern.

"Finding a new home is wise, my friends," she said finally. "But the journey will be long, and I, with my slow pace, fear I'll be left behind."

A heavy silence descended upon them. Pip and Pop adored Beatrice and her tales of the world beyond the valley, filling their dreams with wanderlust. The thought of leaving her behind was unbearable.

Suddenly, Pop chirped excitedly. "I have an idea!"

Pop, always the more impulsive of the two, outlined his plan. They would carry Beatrice! Using a long, sturdy stick, they would each grip one end of their beaks, and Beatrice would hold onto the middle with her strong jaws. Together, they could soar through the air. Beatrice nestled safely between them.

Beatrice, initially skeptical, was eventually won over by their enthusiasm. They spent the next few hours searching for the perfect stick, finally settling on a branch strong enough to bear her weight.

With much anticipation, they set off. Pip and Pop, working in perfect coordination, lifted Beatrice off the ground. The old tortoise, clinging tightly to the stick, felt a thrill of exhilaration as the world tilted beneath her. They sailed above the valley, the lush green landscape spreading out like a tapestry below.

For a while, the journey was a joyous adventure. Beatrice marveled at the world from a perspective she had never known. Pip and Pop, puffed with pride at their ingenuity, reveled in their shared success.

However, trouble soon brewed. As they flew over a bustling marketplace, the sight of colorful stalls filled with delicious treats distracted Beatrice. Unable to contain her excitement, she croaked out, "Oh my, look at those juicy berries!"

The moment her beak opened to speak, the stick slipped from her grasp. Down she plummeted, tumbling through the air with a series of frightened yelps. Pip and Pop, desperate to save their friend, could only watch in horror.

Beatrice landed with a thud on a pile of soft cushions outside a bakery, narrowly escaping serious injury. However, the fall had cracked her shell, leaving her in pain and humiliation.

As the doves rushed to her side, Beatrice, tears welling in her eyes, croaked a voice filled with regret, "This is what comes of speaking out of turn! My love for adventure led me to forget your instructions."

Pip and Pop, hearts heavy with disappointment, gently offered words of comfort. They helped her back to the valley, the dream of a shared adventure now lying broken on the bakery floor.

Despite the unfortunate turn of events, the experience left a valuable lesson for all three. Pip and Pop learned the importance of careful planning and the consequences of acting impulsively. Beatrice, forever marked by her cracked shell, gained a newfound appreciation for the importance of listening and following instructions.

Though they never left the valley, their bond grew stronger. Pip and Pop continued to bring Beatrice stories and news of the world beyond, while Beatrice, with her wisdom and stories, continued to enrich their lives within the familiar valley. Every time they looked at the dwindling stream, they remembered their lesson, a reminder of the importance of communication, trust, and, above all, staying silent in moments that demanded it.

HistoricalYoung AdultStream of ConsciousnessShort StorySeriesScriptPsychologicalMicrofictionLoveHumorHolidayFantasyFan FictionfamilyClassicalAdventure
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Monnade Mixoum

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