FADE IN:
INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY
Two nurses, PAULA (50) and SADIE (24), stand in front of a
television set watching the news. A young man, ELIJAH GREEN,
lays on a bed in a coma. He is pale and thin as a ventilator
breathes for him.
A MALE ANCHOR reads from the tele-prompter as Elijah's
picture is projected on a screen above his head. He wears a
football uniform and poses in a quarterback position.
MALE ANCHOR
Elijah Green was the victim of a
hit and run accident last Friday
night on the corner of 5th and
Lamar. His mother made headlines
across the nation when she
announced that she would be
seeking the right to harvest his
sperm. Mr. Green is currently in
a coma and not expected to survive.
Mrs. Green was denied the right
to harvest her son's sperm today
in a hearing that lasted several
hours. Mrs. Green was very
unhappy with the decision.
A video of MRS. GREEN, 45, stomping out of a courthouse,
shoving camermen and reporters out of the way plays on the
screen.
MRS. GREEN
It's my son. I should be in
control of his sperm, not some
stupid judge. I want a grandbaby,
dammit! I'm gonna take it to the
Supreme Court if I have to. A
mother has rights.
Paula reaches up and turns the television off.
PAULA
She's gonna be hell on wheels.
SADIE
It's almost shift change. I hope
we're gone by the time she gets
here.
Sadie walks over to Elijah's bed and adjusts his bed to a
higher level.
2.
PAULA
It was a dumb idea to begin with.
Who was she planning on using as
a surrogate? She can't afford to
pay someone.
SADIE
I think she was planning on using
his life insurance.
PAULA
What? You've got to be kidding.
That is so tacky.
Paula lifts Elijah's head and adjusts his pillow.
PAULA (CON'T)
Poor kid. Your mom should just
let you rest.
Mrs. Green stands in the doorway.
MRS. GREEN
Let him rest? What do you know?
PAULA
You startled me.
Mrs. Green walks over to Elijah and kisses him on the cheek.
She puts her purse on the bed between his feet and sits next
to him.
MRS. GREEN
I tried honey, but it was no use.
The fucker said no.
(to Paula and Sadie)
They said that I would have to
wait until he passes to harvest
his sperm. Isn't that nuts? They
said as long as he is alive, it's
his body and I have no rights to
his sperm.
SADIE
Really? If he dies you can
harvest his sperm?
MRS. GREEN
I can make every other decision
about his medical care, but I
can't harvest his sperm. Jack
asses. Makes no sense.
3.
PAULA
Is there anything we can do for you?
MRS. GREEN
I don't think his sperm would
still be alive after he's dead.
Does it stay alive after your dead?
PAULA
Um, I don't really know. I'll
check into that and get back with
you.
MRS. GREEN
I don't want to live my life
without him. If I could harvest
his sperm I could have a
grandchild to help me deal the
loss. It's my right as a
grandmother, you know?
SARAH GREEN, 16, wearing jeans, a t-shirt and backpack; walks
into the room holding two cups of coffee. She hands one to
Mrs. Green and sits down in a chair next to the window.
SADIE
Hi, Sarah. How are you today?
SARAH
Okay, I guess.
MRS. GREEN
Did you say hi to your brother,
Sarah? You know he can hear you.
SARAH
Hi, Elijah.
Sarah pulls an I-pod out of her backpack and puts the
earplugs in her ears. She opens a book and begins to read.
MRS. GREEN
She's not affected one bit by the
judge's decision. She has no clue.
SADIE
She's a kid.
PAULA
I'm sure it's affecting her greatly.
4.
MRS. GREEN
She's selfish. She could care
less what happens to him or
whether or not I have a grandchild
by him.
PAULA
She's here, isn't she?
(beat)
We need to go get ready for shift
change. Let us know if you need
anything.
MRS. GREEN
I could use Sadie's help with a
few things. It won't take a minute.
PAULA
Okay. Have a good evening, Mrs.
Green. Everything works out the
way it's supposed to in the end.
Mrs. Green strokes Elijah's hair and fights back tears.
MRS. GREEN
Thank you.
Paula leaves the room. Sadie watches Mrs. Green as she
kisses Elijah's forehead.
Mrs. Green looks over at Sarah, who bobs her head to the
music in her ears. She whispers to Sadie.
MRS. GREEN
Did you think about what I asked
you?
SADIE
Yes, I did. I can't.
MRS. GREEN
Why not?
SADIE
It's wrong. I could lose my
license over this.
MRS. GREEN
Nobody would ever have to know.
Once he passes, you'll have enough
money to stop working until the
baby is born.
5.
SADIE
I can't.
MRS. GREEN
You went to school with Elijah.
You told me that if there was
anything you could do for him
that you would do it. I'm asking
you to please be the surrogate
mother for my grandchild.
SADIE
The judge said no.
MRS. GREEN
There are ways to get around the
law, Sadie. All I'm asking is
for you to hop up there, straddle
my son and impregnate yourself.
SADIE
No. Are you crazy? This isn't
The World According to Garp, Mrs.
Green.
Sadie watches as Mrs Green pulls a turkey baster out of her
purse.
SADIE
There's no way I would have
anything to do with something
that sneaky. I'm a Christian.
MRS. GREEN
What could be more Christian than
giving life to a baby whose father
can't live himself?
SADIE
I'm also a virgin. I don't want
my family to think I've been
sleeping around. No. I won't do
it.
MRS. GREEN
I'll give you half of his life
insurance. You can do what you
want with it. Go to Hawaii, buy
a house; whatever you want.
Sadie opens the door.
6.
SADIE
I love Elijah, but I won't have
any part of it.
Sadie walks out of the room and shuts the door.
Mrs. Green looks at her son and looks at the turkey baster.
MRS. GREEN
Hey, Sarah. You wanna run across
the street and get some sandwiches?
Sarah pulls the ear plugs out of her ears.
SARAH
Huh?
MRS. GREEN
Go across the street and get some
sandwiches?
SARAH
I'm not hungry.
MRS. GREEN
I am. I haven't eaten all day.
You can buy that magazine that
you wanted in the gift shop. You
know, the one with Johnny Depp on
the cover?
Sarah puts her book down.
SARAH
Are we gonna be here all night
again? I'm tired of this stupid
hospital.
MRS. GREEN
We can't leave. What if something
happens to Elijah and we're not
here to say good-bye?
SARAH
Why do you assume he's going to
die? He could come out of it,
you know.
Mrs. Green hands Sarah and twenty dollar bill.
SARAH (CON'T)
What kind do you want?
7.
MRS. GREEN
Chicken avocado, no onions. And
a large diet Dr. Pepper.
Sarah leaves the room. Mrs. Green goes into the bathroom
and washes her hands. She walks over to a box of medical
gloves that hang on the wall. She pulls a glove out of the
box and puts it on.
She walks over to the bed and opens her purse. She pulls out
a condom, opens it and lays it on the bed next to Elijah.
She lifts the sheet and peeks underneath. She cringes.
Mrs. Green reaches under the sheet and pulls. She grimaces
as she pulls again. She raises her hand to reveal a wet
catheter tube.
Elijah MOANS.
MRS. GREEN
Sorry, honey. I hope it didn't
hurt too much.
Mrs. Green places the catheter tube on the bed...picks up
the condom...raises the sheet and places the condom on Elijah.
She looks away as she pumps.
MRS. GREEN
Oh, God, please forgive me.
Mrs. Green continues to pump away as she looks at the ceiling
with tears in her eyes.
INT. HOSPITAL BATHROOM - NIGHT
Mrs. Green washes the turkey baster in the sink. She looks
at herself in the mirror and smiles.
MRS. GREEN
If it works, it was God's will
and I won't feel guilty.
She dries the turkey baster with a paper towel, wraps it in
another one and places it in her purse.
INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY SEVERAL MONTHS LATER
Paula and Sadie change the sheets on Elijah's bed. Elijah
stirs and moans.
Paula and Sadie look at Elijah and smile.
SADIE
Hi, sleepy head.
8.
ELIJAH
(in a raspy voice)
Hi.
SADIE
You're in the hospital. You were
in an accident.
Elijah looks around the room.
PAULA
Your mama is gonna be one happy
lady.
SADIE
Can you tell me your name?
ELIJAH
Elijah.
SADIE
Good. Can you tell me my name?
Elijah looks confused and shakes his head no.
SADIE (CON'T)
That's okay. My name is Sadie
and this is Paula.
PAULA
We've been taking care of you for
a long time, sweety.
SADIE
Look at those beautiful blue eyes,
Paula. He drove the girls crazy
in school.
PAULA
You have long eyelashes, Elijah.
Elijah doesn't respond.
SADIE
You tired? You wanna go back to
sleep?
PAULA
We need to try to keep him awake
until the doctor comes. I'll go
page him.
9.
Paula runs into Mrs. Green and Sarah as they walk in, she
walks out. Mrs. Green and Sarah both wear long coats and
mittens.
PAULA
He's awake, Mrs. Green.
Mrs. Green and Sarah look over at Elijah.
MRS. GREEN
Elijah? Honey, you're awake?
ELIJAH
Hi.
Elijah gives them a little smile. Mrs. Green rushes over to
him and kisses him on the cheek.
MRS. GREEN
I can't believe it. I can't
believe you're awake and that you
know who I am. Thank you, God.
Thank you, thank you.
Sarah waves shyly at Elijah. Elijah smiles at her.
SADIE
Now that he's awake, we'll do
another brain scan. His reflexes
are good and he's responding to
my questions.
MRS. GREEN
That's wonderful.
SADIE
His memory may be a little off
for a while, but it'll come back
eventually.
Mrs. Green pulls of her jacket to reveal a pregnant stomach.
Elijah sees her stomach but doesn't respond.
MRS. GREEN
So much has gone on since your
accident, honey. We made national
news and everything.
Mrs. Green rubs her belly.
10.
MRS. GREEN
I was so worried that you weren't
gonna make it and that I would
never have a grandchild by you.
I guess I should've had faith,
but I was desperate. I hope you
understand.
SADIE
You may want to talk about that
later. He's still pretty groggy.
Sarah walks over to the bed, pulls off her jacket to reveal
her pregnant belly.
SARAH
I guess this means I'm not gettin'
half of his life insurance. Not
cool, Mom. Not cool.
SADIE
Now do you understand why the
judge said no?
FADE OUT
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