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A Good Haircut

My entry for Oneg’s #MayMicroMaker unofficial Vocal challenge

By Leslie WritesPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 2 min read
Top Story - May 2025
A Good Haircut
Photo by Markus Winkler on Unsplash

Ruthie used a paper fan with a picture of blue-eyed Jesus while the air conditioner audibly struggled. She’d brought her daughter to Connie’s salon for a trim. Connie cleared her afternoon, knowing it would take hours. First to dye, set, and style the look that Ruthie had maintained for twenty years. Then to comb the girl’s knotted clumps of auburn hair.

The girl tolerated the pain, eyes shut, biting her lip. Ruthie scrutinized the whole operation. Connie’s grip on the comb was difficult with her arthritis. This, of course, made the process take even longer.

After a few minutes of agony for the child, Connie pulled Ruthie aside.

“Listen, I’ve taken care of you a long time. You trust me?”

“Connie, what are you getting at?”

“Let’s ask Susanne if she wants a short haircut.”

“Little girls shouldn’t have short hair. She’s enough of a tomboy as it is.”

Susanne preferred overalls and catching frogs with the boys. But now that she was getting older Ruthie imagined it was time for her to put away childish things and act more like a lady.

“It’s just hair, Ruthie. It’ll grow back. Besides, it’s summer. Let’s get it off her neck.”

Ruthie grumbled in response.

Susanne heard every word. She was used to being talked about and her mother was terrible at whispering. She braced for the tug of the comb again. But then Ruthie met her gaze in the mirror.

“Is that what you want?”

Susanne nodded tentatively, watching for her mother’s reaction. Connie handed her a book of hairstyles. Susanne flipped past pixies and bobs to pompadours and crewcuts to make her selection. Now Ruthie bit her lip..

Hair fell like confetti. When Connie shut off the clippers, Susanne was grinning ear to ear.

“I reckon that suits you, baby.”

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Author’s note:

I was inspired by Jules Heron, a hairstylist and Instagram content creator I follow. They specialize in helping LGBTQ+ clients achieve a look that aligns with their identity. They ask the right questions and personalize the experience with kindness and respect. Something as simple as a haircut can have a big impact and you know I love a glow up! 🏳️‍🌈

If you liked this microfic you might also enjoy this longer short story I wrote about a mother and her queer son.

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Leslie Writes

Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.

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    Written by Leslie Writes