A girl’s heart…
“Oh Jeff” flash fiction challenge
Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but..."
“You’re heading off to work. I’ll give you a bell later. We’re still on for Tuesday Thai fried rice, right? See you then.”
Wait, Jeff…
“Good… the flowers arrived. They’ll cheer you up. I knew a touch of home would do the trick. Waratahs, Wattle and Everlasting Daisies aren’t found on every street corner.”
Oh, yes… the flowers… beautiful…
“I know… you wouldn’t survive without me! You’re my everything…”
You’re sweet, but…
Not now Louie!
Jeff, please listen!
I’m sooo sorry…
“Who’s Louie? What’s he doing at your place? The sun’s barely up! Did he sleep over?”
Well, yes… he did...
You know Louie…
“Never heard of him! Fine time to tell me! I was about to ‘Pop the Question’ tonight!”
That’s it!
Jeff, we’re done!
“What! Why?”
Four months together and you still don’t know Louie…
He’s the ‘Love of my Life’!
“You deranged, two-timing…”
“Ruff, ruff, ruff…”
Louie, stop…
SIT!
Down, you silly pup…
Goodbye, Jeff!
“But…”
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Written for Raymond G. Taylor’s challenge.
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