A Flity LoveStory
Deon&Mike💔
Mike was my first love... my soulmate...
One tragic accident, Rendered our love isolated... Although it was many years ago... The impacts thrive inside, Currently.
I wait motionlessly if it's true love then he shall return to me.
The chronometer ticking to a heartbeat, Of mine and his... If love is so strong, how could the line be so thin?
I searched for him, however, he left me where I stood.
Frankly When You kissed me, didn't you love me? Didn't you feel the way I felt to be around you? Wasn't it you and me creating Magic within our Chemistry?
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Comments (19)
Aww, that was so emotional and this line just grabbed me, 'If love is so strong, how could the line be so thin?' Great work!
The heart will go on. Usually to greater things. Beautifully sad.
"He left me where I stood" - lovely, heartwrenching line. Well done.
great lonzoward!
There's a lot of energy in this. The chemical in the brain that receives the signals from the physical that gets converted into body talk and pheromones that all cascades into the sexual. Yet, it's difficult for one person to continue that energy on their own, especially when the one who would exchange that love with them is no longer there.
Beautiful! ❤️
Emotional!!! Well done!!!💖💖💕
This was emotional and very well written! Nice work Lonzo! 😊
Very nicely done.
Very emotional story! I love it!
Nice 💜
Very. good
❤️❤️I want more
Beautifully written my friend.
gorgeous work lil bro! 😉
Magic mirrors tend only to reflect in one direction.
Could not resist a romantic story, beautiful cover picture 🥰👌
awe... I felt this. Nice!
This is great. Sad, and great! Nice work!