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A Flity LoveStory

Deon&Mike💔

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 20 days ago • Updated 18 days ago • 1 min read
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A Flity LoveStory
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Mike was my first love... my soulmate...

One tragic accident, Rendered our love isolated... Although it was many years ago... The impacts thrive inside, Currently.
I wait motionlessly if it's true love then he shall return to me.

The chronometer ticking to a heartbeat, Of mine and his... If love is so strong, how could the line be so thin?

I searched for him, however, he left me where I stood.
Frankly When You kissed me, didn't you love me? Didn't you feel the way I felt to be around you? Wasn't it you and me creating Magic within our Chemistry?

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  • Heather Hubler15 days ago

    Aww, that was so emotional and this line just grabbed me, 'If love is so strong, how could the line be so thin?' Great work!

  • Novel Allen16 days ago

    The heart will go on. Usually to greater things. Beautifully sad.

  • noor17 days ago

    great lonzoward!

  • Thavien Yliaster19 days ago

    There's a lot of energy in this. The chemical in the brain that receives the signals from the physical that gets converted into body talk and pheromones that all cascades into the sexual. Yet, it's difficult for one person to continue that energy on their own, especially when the one who would exchange that love with them is no longer there.

  • Dana Stewart19 days ago

    Beautiful! ❤️

  • Babs Iverson19 days ago

    Emotional!!! Well done!!!💖💖💕

  • Donna Fox19 days ago

    This was emotional and very well written! Nice work Lonzo! 😊

  • Cathy holmes19 days ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Very emotional story! I love it!

  • Nice 💜

  • Very. good

  • ❤️❤️I want more

  • Beautifully written my friend.

  • Tiffany Gordon 20 days ago

    gorgeous work lil bro! 😉

  • Magic mirrors tend only to reflect in one direction.

  • Mariann Carroll20 days ago

    Could not resist a romantic story, beautiful cover picture 🥰👌

  • Steffany Pope20 days ago

    awe... I felt this. Nice!

  • This is great. Sad, and great! Nice work!

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