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A Boy in the new city

an adventurous journey of Eden

By Ghost Writer Published 3 days ago 5 min read
Sweet home

Beginning...

Eden was living his little beautiful life in his beautiful small town. He was an introvert, ambitious, and self reserved person. He had his small but beautiful life in his small town. He used to make a visit in community center every weekend to serve to local needy people, although he was an introvert to core but when he had some good accompany he'd be absolutely joyful and cheerful person. All people around him loved him and treated him well with respect. He was considered as a good example across the town.

Days passed down and he completed his high school from a public school of his town. He did well in his high school if we look up to the standard of that public school but from his result his father was not him. His father was very disappointed from him. He made worse types of taunts towards him which made him feel devastated even more sad. His mother was with him and motivated him with her experience of life.

Eden used to take a walk whenever he used to feel low. He used to go to backyard of his house where there was a forest. He was a nature lover and used to talk to trees. With this way he used to feel good and this activity used to make him feel better about the life.

One day his father Mr. Folk came back to office in evening and he had an argument with someone over the performance of Eden and his's colleague's son John and that made him feel more angry for Eden. He asked Eden to pack his bag and leave town to work in the capital city Fury. After hearing this Eden became completely sad and anxious. He never thought in his life that he'd have to live his town. The capital city was 400 miles away from his town. He had never went outside his town except for a few miles in his neighborhood rural areas where too he had gone for social work like teaching to small kids, making awareness among old age people regarding Internet frauds, blood donation camps etc. But this time he was asked to leave his town completely and he won't be able to come back for a while.

He talked to his mother about it but this town his mother also couldn't help him. Again he went to his backyard and this time he cried in front of trees. He felt completely lost, he had no idea how he will go and survive in that big city Fury. He had a great peaceful life in his current place. He was never been to any crowded place neither he liked to be in it. In the Fury city life was tough, crime was rising, suspicious and mysterious deaths of people used to be on regular basis. He did not have a single known person in Fury city. He had no idea how he will deal with it. All of these thoughts made him feel shattered and traumatized. He felt completely lost again and this time neither talking to trees nor taking a walk was working for him. After two hours he finally came back from the forest and had a dinner. He wanted to talk to his father and convince him not to make him leave this town but he couldn't talk since he knew his father and he knew it would be complete waste of time and his father might get more angry towards him. So after dinner he went to his room upside and started thinking about his future. His father had already told him to leave the town in next two days because he had booked a private car which will drop him in the capital city Fury.

Eden used to overthink a lot so he started visualizing his life in the Fury city that how his life would be there, he thought about his survivability. After thinking a lot about it, he finally slept. In the morning he woke up late that day because he had been thinking about his future for all the night. The time he woke up, his father had already left for office. Eden started his regular schedule of doing workout in woods and came back home. He went to library and local public school, by that time all of his surrounding knew about him leaving the town and all of them asked him not to leave but since he was himself helpless he smiled at them and said I am leaving this time to achieve big and make everyone of you feel proud. All cheered him. Internally he also had no idea what he is going to do but after thinking a lot in the night Eden reached to a conclusion that there is no skipping his fate and he will have to accept it.

Finally two days passed down and the day had come. Eden woke up early and made his mind mentally for leaving his beloved beautiful town. He had already done all the meet up with his surrounding circle a day before. Although he did not have much friends but few of the people whom he had worked came to say him goodbye. This was the time when he had to say goodbye to his small town and all his old life. Early morning he had gone to woods to say goodbye to his lovely trees and a few birds and animals. It was a quite emotional moment for him. Later he talked to his mother and his mother consoled him and made him feel better by talking about beautiful chicks, parties and fun in the big capital city. She asked him to explore his life, don't take too much overload of work, have fun and since crimes are on rampage she also asked him to take good care of himself and try to avoid staying outside of the town. Then he hugged his mother, he saw his father who had no emotions on his face regarding his leaving the house so he sat inside the car. The car started moving and through its window he could see his past life getting end slowly. He finally left. After 10 hours of his journey through the car he reached to the Fury city, the driver dropped him near a motel and he left for the small town. Now Eden is own his own.

Chapter 2: A new journey in the crime and thrilling city FURY

Continued in next part......

PS: Depends on the performance of Part one

AdventureFantasyFan FictionPsychological

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