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WHO DESTROYED THE MALL

THE MALL TOWER

By Sandra BongjohPublished 3 years ago 8 min read
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The murderer is here, not too far away of the houses where people live. He is hidden somewhere.

In the courtyard, there is a bunch of people who live in the same apartment unit. A lot of complaints and reports were made by people who live in the courtyard Simons Street, 12th. This courtyard was the most notorious courtyard for the number of crimes that ocurred there.

Many people left the apartment building were they were residing because of the crimes that ocurred there. The number of crimes became consistent.

New residents who come to the apartment building to rent an apartment or buy it are people who are not aware of the crimes that ocurred in the courtyard. The news of the crimes that happened in the courtyard were spread on the newspapers and later on the television.

Not everybody watches the television.

Nabi, a young girl who is eighteen years old never heard about this apartment building bad reputation. She is going to college pretty soon and was looking for an apartment building not too far away from the school that she will be attending. She is going to community college.

This is how the story of Nabi a girl who comes from Cameroon happened. She came with her parents to the United States to Los Angeles and looked for a decent apartment not too far from her school to be able to go to school. Her father remained home. Her mother is the only person who accompanied her to come to the United States.

When Nabi arrived to California, she really found the city of Los Angeles big and adventurous.

She does not know the courtyard where the apartment that she and her mother looked for is a big apartment unit that has a lot of victims. Luckily she will live in this apartment with her mother.

They took the plane from Laguardia to Los Angeles. Nabi liked the flight that she took with her mother. This flight from Laguardia, New York to Los Angeles, California was very pleasant. They both enjoyed traveling with United Airlines. When they had left their country they took Camer, this is one of the cheapest flights that they took to come to the United States.

The hotel the two women resided in when they reached California was a decent hotel. It was a motel with two stars. There were hundred rooms.

The hotel offered breakfast and no other meals. In each customer's room, there was a big television, a fridge, a big table and two big beds. The two women were staying in the hotel.

They were residing in the hotel and liked the weather. They came to the United States when it was summer.

They liked everything about the country. Mrs. Rogne intended to buy food from outside for her daughter and for herself. They did not have access to a gas cooker in their hotel room. She decided to buy food from outside already made from the supermarket.

This apartment building located in Simons Street, 12th has a lot of suspense. A lot of people do not want to go to this apartment and ask to rent a room or to buy it.

Mrs. Rogne is not aware of the notorious apartment building. She intends to go there the following day with her daughter to rent an apartment. Her husband is the person who sponsors both of the two women.

The two women were in the hotel room watching the television. They really liked the programs that ocurred. It was 11:AM. They had breakfast at 6: AM. Now Mrs. Rogne wanted to go outside and buy lunch from Walmart.

At 11:AM, Mrs. Rogne left the hotel room and went outside to Walmart. She headed to Walmart. She did not need to take a taxi or the bus to go to Walmart because it was five minutes from the hotel.

She took all her time to walk and when she reached Walmart, she entered the mall, and went to the food section already cooked.

She saw a variety of food that was in the counter such as popcorn chicken, salad, fried chicken. There were two ladies serving the food. She asked: " Hi ! I want some pop corn chicken and some of the salad.

The lady said: " Surely you can have some pop corn chicken and some salad." She put some of the salad in a plastic container and some pop corn chicken in a white plastic container.

She put everything in a plastic bag Walmart and Nabi took the food along with her. She went to the cashier and paid for it.

After she was done with her shopping, she left the supermarket and went back to the hotel. Everything that she bought cost $15.

She left the food on the table for her daughter and I.

The two women prayed before eating. Mrs. Rogne wanted to take a shower first before her daughter.

Her daughter Nabi is the one who leads both of them in prayer. After the prayer that the two ladies had, they started eating the salad with pop corn chicken.

They serve themselves the salad in a plastic plate and some pop corn chicken.

They really enjoyed the food. Mrs. Rogne really wanted them to see the new apartment where they are going to reside and where her daughter is going to remain.

After eating quite a good quantity of salad and pop corn chicken, they left the leftovers in the fridge.

They decided to take a nap. They were full.

After lunch, they took a nap of an hour and half. They were about to do other things. Mrs. Rogne did not know the city of Los Angeles.

She did not want her daughter to go outside without her permission. Mrs. Rogne and her daughter remained in the hotel until the following day where they will talk to the boss of the apartment to rent an apartment.

Nabi turned on the television and put on one of her channels. She watched the television for a very long time.

One of the shows that Nabi liked was " I like ice cream". Her mother was reading a magazine and not paying attention to the television.

This show " I like ice cream" was one of the hilarious shows that Nabi was watching. This show is about two women who share the same house. It is about a white woman and a black woman who share the same house. These two women were happy together. The black lady has two kids and the white lady does not have kids.

The black lady who has two kids does not have a husband and lives with the white lady. She cooks and takes all her time to do things.

The movie was interesting and lasted one hour. After this show, Abi watched cartoons. After cartoons, she left the hotel room to go downstairs with her mother and spent the time in the living room.

The day passed really quickly. Mrs. Rogne went to the bathroom, and started taking a shower. Her daughter was still in the living room downstairs.

After Mrs. Rogne was done taking her shower, her daughter asked the receptionist: " Please can you call room 101 for me" I want to speak to my mother. Mrs. Rogne was done since an hour taking a shower.

When the receptionist called " Room 101". Hi, said Abi to her mother.

"I am done with my stay in the living room. " Can I come back upstairs. I am taking the elevator right now." Yes, you can do so.

She went back upstairs and was happy to hear from her mother that they will move to their new apartment building but Abi does not know what is going to happen. This apartment building is very mysterious.

She thinks that when she and her mother will be going to this apartment building matters will be fine. She is happy to reside in the States but she does not know where she is going to move with her mother. She does not know that this courtyard on the Simons Street, 12 North.

This is one of the most dangerous place where the two women will be going tomorrow. Right now they are in their room eating the leftovers of what they bought at Walmart.

When it was 12:00 PM, the two women started sleeping. Abi took a shower before sleeping. She was thinking of the following day of how the apartment where she will be living will look like.

After the beautiful night they passed yesterday, the two women went left at around 9: AM in the morning tomorrow. They took a taxi to go to the apartment building that had a bad reputation and that the majority who watches the news is escaping.

The trip in the taxi was of an two hours and half. It was not too far away from the hotel where they resided.

Behind the taxi, there were few suitcases. There were four suitcases. There were Mrs. Rogne's suitcases, and her daughter's.

When they reached the apartment building, the taxi driver dropped at the entrance of the manager.

The two women dropped down, and went to the apartment building. The manager received a call from the two women and asked them to come to the office before showing them their apartment where they will reside.

They sat in the waiting room and the manager who saw them, came to them and talked to them: " Hi, I know that you are the two new customers who want to rent an apartment."

"I will be glad to show you the most expensive apartments and the cheapest apartments said the manager."

" Please follow me", you will both make the choice and tell me which apartment is good for you and that you can afford."

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Sandra Bongjoh

Hi,

I am Sandra Bongjoh. I am an author. I currently live in West Roxbury, Massachusetts. I write stories for both children and adults. I also write novels on other topics such as politics books, cookery .

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